Comments | red_packet: "Red Pizzas" (The Mentalist)

rodlox in red_packet

"Red Pizzas" (The Mentalist)

Feb 04, 2010 17:39

given past events, I'll post this now, so I don't forget.

EDIT: forgot the italics; sorry.

Title: Red Pizzas.
now cross-posted to Archive of our own - "red pizzas"Fandom: The Mentalist ( Read more... )

fic

Comments 6

mustangcandi February 5 2010, 05:13:33 UTC

This turned out great; loved the edits you made (and apologize profusely that I didn't get a copy back to you sooner.) I think you should share this over at mentalistfic because you've really nailed the characters here. Love it.

(I almost used the word lovely again... what's up with that? haha.)

rodlox February 5 2010, 05:29:05 UTC

thank you. (and no worries). *shares*
and thank you.

(no idea; sorry)

dejla February 5 2010, 18:47:48 UTC

This turned out beautifully -- liked the edits!

pensive1 February 5 2010, 19:03:48 UTC

This was a lovely little experience with Cho! :D

Lisbon being the responsible party pleases me in ways I can't describe. :)

Well done!

kaytee4ever February 8 2010, 04:07:44 UTC

Yay! I like this! :)

I think you got the characterization down well.

*feeling the Cho love* :)

darkestnight12 February 12 2010, 08:59:26 UTC

Aww! I love the little gift from inside Cho's culture that Lisbon gave him! And how the little insights that Cho had on everybody on his team.