For Me; Kirk/Spock

[red_at_three]

Title: For Me
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Word Count: ~1,430
Rating: NC-17
Summary: PWP, Kirk/Spock first time fantasy porn of a written fast and spontaneously when I should be going to sleep variety.
Notes: For the st_xi_kink meme: "You will lift your hips now, Jim." 

Comments

UNF-GUH

[nix_this]

Oh sweet Jesus epic win XD Is it hot in here?

WE ARE EVEN. Wow, yeah.. Hawt.

I love how you translated the breathless urgency and made this race. Your tender but controlling Spock is fantastic and I absolutely loved the line:
"For me, you will" I could hear that perfectly in my head, low and maybe a little bit growly.

You're timing is also impeccable :D I've just finished your fic XD 8000+ words of schmoopy smut!

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

Re: UNF-GUH

[red_at_three]

No, no, thank you so much! Your comment makes me quite giddy with happiness. "Tender, but controlling"--that is totally what I wanted this Spock to be. There's a really great Spock-talking-dirty fic somewhere on the kink meme that I'm pretty sure I ripped off for this, but ever since I read it, it's been my ideal Spock. Low and growly and insistant, but calm, but not too calm, and really caring too.

Ah, thank you again for your fic. I've been reading it quickly in spare minutes and I will, I swear, right a proper review of everything once I get a spare moment to reread it properly and form a response. But it will happen!

Re: UNF-GUH

[nix_this]

If you find the dirty talking Spock fic, you are required by fandom law to share XD Sounds hot. Low, growly and insistent is how I hear him too. Kind of like a rumbling purr that vibrates right through you. *shiver* Lucky Jim XD

Re: fic - take your time. I'll shoot you the link when I edit it properly and post it complete XD

Re: UNF-GUH

[red_at_three]

I have (re)found the fic! I had it bookmarked on my home computer but not on my laptop so I wasn't sure if I'd be able to find it again, but I did. It is here:

http://community.livejournal.com/st_xi_kink/379.html?thread=808059#t808059

I think there's another fill at the bottom but the one I was referring to was "When It Is With Your Body," and its second part, below.

I definitely feel that Spock would have the best sex-voice ever. Oh, Jim; he's my favorite character to live vicariously through.

[jesse_kips]

OH. MY. GOD. This was amazing! So hot and weighed down with the emotions - I could practically feel them winding around me pressing down. Absolutely fabulous. <3

[red_at_three]

Thanks very much! I'm so excited that I actually wrote something hot...

[13empress]

this is really sensual and hot and intimate and amazing details. glad to have read it and I only happened upon it combing through the filled delicious links for the prev kink meme -- have you ever posted this to a comm? if you haven't you should -needs sharing

[red_at_three]

Thank you very much! (I'm glad you found it; I've been lazy about crossposting recently so my fics have gotten rather lost, but I'm being a bit better about it now.)

[red_at_three]

Thank you very much!

I've come to love Kirk/Spock in every configuration, but the first K/S stories I read were bottom!Kirk, and so I have a soft spot for it; I do rather wish there were more first time stories in reboot about...

[deadlynight27]

Wow. This was amazing. My favorite part was A flicker of tongue just where his ribs end and then Spock is trailing his lips again, his mouth open wide against Jim’s skin up, and up, and up, and into his neck he almos t growls, “You will lift your hips for me.” I can imagine it so well.

I wish I could say more but my brain has fizzled and died. =)

[red_at_three]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, though I'm sorry about the adverse effect on the brain...