Comments | recasted_series: [non-canon fic] Acedia

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[non-canon fic] Acedia

Jul 19, 2006 18:09

I suppose I should put this as a preface and forewarning. This is a non-canon possibility of how Sloth might have been collected by the other Recasted Series homunculi. Thus, it has not been approved by Hime and I have no idea if I’m portraying these characters properly. I would contact Hime, but I’m terribly shy and would feel I was bothering her ( Read more... )

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hime1999 July 20 2006, 02:57:44 UTC

See that icon I use there? That's exactly how I look now♥

And feel free to contact me anytime XD

nekrotica July 20 2006, 19:46:56 UTC

Wow. I was not expecting a review from you, of all people. I'm so happy I may dance. :)

I certainly will, if I decide to write more in this AU. It's an amazing idea, you should be proud. :)

God, I'm such a brown-noser.

corbeauaura July 20 2006, 03:30:45 UTC

Ooh. Me likes a lot. :D

There needs to be more of this series! T^T

nekrotica July 20 2006, 19:48:07 UTC

Why, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

And, yes, there certainly does, no strike mark required.

gwyneda July 20 2006, 08:09:06 UTC

*sheepishly admits that she didnt think this fic was worth clicking the link at first, but did so anways, and is grateful she did*

d00d, serously, whoa

o_o;

That was NICE o_o;;;;;

Moresoonplz? ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

nekrotica July 20 2006, 19:53:57 UTC

Thank you for your honesty, I appreciate it. Like I said, I am very shy and also terribly self-deprecating. I can only imagine a big neon sign saying 'these characters are OOC' won't get me many readers, huh? Unless there was something else. Now I'm paranoid.

On the other hand, thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you liked it. :)

As for more, I'm not entirely sure yet. It's certainly a possibility, though.

gwyneda July 21 2006, 07:26:44 UTC

Well, actually, the thing is:

when I first stareted reading this fic, I forgot that this was recasted series, so I was seeing regular FMA Envy and Lust in my head until about the third paragraph XD

Dont ask me why, couldnt tell you even if I tried. x.x;

but yes, I like your writing style, you have a lovely way of fleshing out the scene, and adding just the right amount of conveyance of emotion (does that make sense?) so it was very easy to follow and enjoyable to read.

So if I didnt say it first, I'll say it now: Thank you for writing and I hope to see more from you, not just here in R!S but any fandom really (that we have in common that is) ^^

strawbryshuichi July 20 2006, 23:24:37 UTC

:OOOO That was amazing~

::points up to her icon:: that's my face!

nekrotica July 21 2006, 00:38:59 UTC

Thank you for the compliment, you're too kind. :)

corinn July 21 2006, 06:17:30 UTC

Mmmmmmmmmmmm. *purrs with delight* So much love. There's one or two awkward sentences, but they don't bother me too terribly much. (Well, the one about privileges seems to be missing a word/phrase like "revoked," but my brain filled that in automatically.)

Squee. I deviously await moooore.

nekrotica July 21 2006, 11:50:24 UTC

Missing? It's not missing, the word 'revoked' has been there the whole time. *Shifty eyes* Okay, I think what happened was I was going for 'having certain privileges revoked' and thought of 'losing certain privileges', so I mixed the two up and forgot a word.

In any case, I'm glad you like it, despite the awkward sentences. :)