Fic: Die Trying

Jun 25, 2011 09:51

Title: Die Trying
Characters/Pairings: Eric Thompson, Candice Wilmer, Noah Bennet
Rating: PG
Warnings: None!
Spoiler alert: If you saw season one, you're good.
Summary: Thompson considers his future while trying to find Claire.
Word Count: 376

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game_byrd June 25 2011, 19:19:26 UTC
Ooh! Oh, I love that! I love her inquiry about her limits, her implicit desire to go beyond them and his casual callousness about whoever might get in his way. Awesome!

(I'm hoping/assume you enter this in the collateral damage contest?)

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rebelle_elle June 26 2011, 22:58:00 UTC
lol! Exactly why I wrote it, lol. Thanks!

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hrgqmf June 25 2011, 20:32:54 UTC
Ugh. Isn't that just like Thompson.

Oh look who's still number one! Me!

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rebelle_elle June 26 2011, 22:58:51 UTC
And he was just staring at you like a pervert.

Make you wonder what he's doing under the desk, yes?

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vivihanna June 25 2011, 20:53:34 UTC
Nice story, thanks for sharing it! :D

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rebelle_elle June 26 2011, 22:59:06 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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paynesgrey June 26 2011, 01:14:39 UTC
Ooh, very nice Thompson characterization here, and it's so good to see Candice involved as well. Great job.

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rebelle_elle June 26 2011, 22:59:34 UTC
Thank you!

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dancingdragon3 June 30 2011, 16:49:10 UTC
Very nice! Great characterizations. I loved the last lines, but also when he thought about how her attractive body was probably fake. Nice touch!

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rebelle_elle July 4 2011, 19:29:59 UTC
Hee! Thanks!

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