Comments | rebcake: Fic: Fire in the Soul (2bc/?)

rebcake

Fic: Fire in the Soul (2bc/?)

Sep 29, 2011 09:35

I've got a few more chapters of my story/travelogue for seasonal_spuffy today! Set in San Francisco, but NOT comics compliant.

Title: Fire in the Soul (2bc/?)
Author: Rebcake
Rating: PG13
Word count: 4100
Warnings: A bit Dru-ish
A/N: Beta’d by snickfic, except for a section added later, which was reviewed by MiAmor. Some photos contained herein are copyrighted as noted ( Read more... )

fire in the soul, fic, drusilla, spike, buffy

Comments 30

gillo September 29 2011, 21:02:39 UTC

Mmmmm. Nice.

I love Spike scaring the little girl. And Buffy dancing. That's all she's ever done.

Looking forward to more of this!

rebcake September 29 2011, 22:49:17 UTC

Thanks for the speedy feedback, sweetie!

I am fond of Spike doing his Big Bad routine as well, even if we're none of us fooled...except perhaps a tiny bit of Buffy that can't help but wonder.

I'm hoping to get the next bit up tonight (which I suppose is tomorrow for you). Stay tuned!

slaymesoftly September 30 2011, 01:03:15 UTC

Copied it all out to read at work tomorrow. I had to copy it from LJ because DW apparently doesn't permit that? I dunno Wouldn't let me copy, anyway. So thanks for putting it both places. :)

rebcake September 30 2011, 04:55:35 UTC

Yeah, it looks like neither site is providing everything a poster and reader could want. At least the editing capability on LJ miraculously reappeared today!

I hope you enjoy!

kerry_220 September 30 2011, 02:22:45 UTC

There is something quite mesmerising about the way you write. A cyber thrall??

rebcake September 30 2011, 05:04:03 UTC

"Mesmerising" is a very nice way to put it. It's loads better than "boring". I was going for a dream-like kind of mood for inside the Conservatory, with everything feeling eerie and off-balance. I'm glad that came across!

readerjane September 30 2011, 02:41:18 UTC

Such lovely portents, all magic and drama!

Really enjoying this.

rebcake September 30 2011, 05:05:52 UTC

It's a rare foray into plot, for me! *fingers crossed* I'm so happy you like it!

owenthurman September 30 2011, 08:56:31 UTC

It's like a tourist map and an adventure story in one.

I'm glad to see another part of this today. I hope to get more.

rebcake September 30 2011, 18:37:50 UTC

tourist map and an adventure story

Yeah, that was the idea. I don't generally have lots of plotty plot, just characters doing their thing. So I needed a way of getting things to happen, and thought, "Well, where would these guys go? What would happen in that spot and where would they be likely to go next?" I have my fingers crossed that people will find the local bits interesting. I know I like it when you do it!