Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 19
Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 19
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.
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Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.
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Of course, I'm curious. ;)
*Yay* to Queens of the Stone Age. This is a awesome song again. :D So great for the flow. :)
Great to know about Jasper's and Edwards pact. Their relation is awesome phrased. And *awww* to little Amber again. :D
Also the little scene, where they talked about the family picnic + where Bella got lost in the past call I consistent in writing. I love that, you always write nothing without a reason. :)
And Mon please say to Alice my thank you for the line: “Ok, stop it you two,” *LOL* ;)
OMG I especially love all scenes, when Jasper takes care of baby Amber. This is always too cute and adorable. I can't help myself you can not resist you have to love your Jasper. *lol+melt* *AWWW*
Very good to use Bells and Eds visit to set the things straight with Cynthia's situation and plans. Also very good to show Edwards and Bella's future plans here too.
Anyway it was a really wonderful scene with this two couples :) + that you mentioned how much Jasper missed this, too. :)
And *rrr* + *awww* for the wall/bed part. Very funny and sexy. :D Also it was a awesome idea, that Alice and Jasper summarized the whole day in bed. Very good closure. But *LOL* to Jaspers plans. ;)
*LOL* to Jaspers thinking about risking his life. Yeah, women and their luggage. :D Anyway I love their teasing always so much, and of course very much, when baby Amber is included, too. ;D This is just always so wonderful, amazing, funny and cute written! Yeah, Alice listen to your man. ;D *LOL* Also Jazzy and his stories did not only entertain Amber. He entertain us always very much, too. *grin* ;D
But Mon OMG, the whole scene, where Jasper realised Alice called him Ambers Daddy is really amazing. Also Jaspers train of thoughts is awesome described and phrased. It shows so wonderful what he think about this huge step. This whole part goes direct to the heart. *melt* :) Ok, and I can not forget to mention Amber during the kiss. This baby is just too adorable for words. :D
And *Awww* for this line: "But Jasper didn’t complain, he seemed rather amused and threw Amber a knowing look." Too cute, just too cute. ;)
*LOL* to the older Lady. ;) I mean we would pay to see this and she got it for free. *LOL*
Anyway this was the most awesome drive scene I have ever read. :)
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You blow me away with your brilliance. :) Thank you so much, once again, for rocking so much and leaving me such a wonderful review. I love you!
I'm glad you like the song choice. I'm in love with this song and think it fits wuite well. So, thank you!
Jasper and Edward's relationship is different than Jasper and Emmett's relationship, not less significant, but different and I wanted to show that. For example, Emmett wouldn't keep quiet in a situation like this, but Edward is different. I'm glad you liked that. :)
Thank you, I try to write everything for a reason and not just make it a filler. :) I thanked Alice for you, she said you were very welcome. :)
I'm also glad you liked Bella and Edward here. I changed Bella a tiny little bit, more to my taste. ;)
Yup, Jazzy is a naughty boy, but unfortunately for him, Alice was just too tired. Long night, busy day. ;)
I tried to include the fashion/shoppig/girl side of Alice here. In my opinion, both Rose and her are the same in this way. They both pack way too much - as do most of the girls. And Jasper learned that and was already used to that. I had to include a little humor. :) Cause I love it when Jasper is a tease. :)
Oh, thank you so much. I included this scene, when Alice calls Jasper daddy, because I wanted them to make this step before the whole daddy issue comes out. So it wouldn't be like they were doing it cause they had to, but because they want to. :)
I'm very happy you liked the drive. I think I am writing all the moments I would want to see with Alice and Jasper and how I would want to see them. Basically, it is all a big wish from my part. ;)
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Yep, the song was awesome for this chapter. :)
Yep, they have different relationships with each other and you showed this wonderful here. :D Yep, Emmett is just Emmett and that's why we love him. ;D
Oh thanks sweetie and thanks to Alice! ;)
Yeah, I really love your taste and Bella otherwise is often a character, who is the last on my fav list. *Oops* ;)
Yup, he is ;), but he is also very understandable...so good closure. :)
Yep, I agree with your opinion about Rose and Alice and of course with Jasper. I love that, too. :D
Yep, I really understand your need to include this. I think this was perfect and the right choice to make this step before the daddy issue... :)
I so agree here with your opinion again!
Your wishes are my wishes sweetie in the A&J universe. ;)
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We love Emmett, I have always disliked people who wrote him as stupid or didn't like him. Idiots.
You are very welcome. :D
Yeah, same here. I'm not that much into Bella. Too much whining and complaining. And idealizing.
*high fives*
Thank you, I'm glad you agree.
That is awesome. :D
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