Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 18
Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 18
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.
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Yep, it really fitted well. :)
The raindrops, they were really wonderful placed here and fitted so wonderful in that scene. You wrote Jaspers reaction wonderful and I think, too that he would first check on Amber. * I'm always in a daze, too. ;)
Oh sweetie, the description of what he wears to bed was really important ;) to imagine it properly. *LOL*
I think that you go with the flow is really good and you really don't have to be nervous about it, because you and the flow make always the best findings/outcome/results. :)
Yeah, I can understand Alice problems, but of course I'm glad, that she has not to worry about so much. :)
*LOL* and yep, both scenes were awesome and the bed scene with Amber was just too adorable. *Awww* And I'm so glad you included it. Did I already say *Awww*? ;)
The reader just could love your humor sweetie. At least, I love it. :D And that you always try to incluse some humor, shows so much writing quality again. :)
*nod* *nod* *nod* to the shaving. *THUD* Again I love you feeling/sense for scenes. :D
As I said, you are very welcome sweetie. And I'm sorry it took me so long. <3U2 *hugs*
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Yeah, I thought it important too. As you said, so we can imagine him better. Important for the mind and imagination whether he is shirtless or not. ;)
I'm glad you like the way I think and how I do this, that really means a lot to me. :D
Don't worry about how long it takes you to reply, sweetie, really there is nothing to worry about. :D
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