Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 14

[realynn8]

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 14
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

Comments

[frust_sheep]

PART 2:
I love the comment about their lack of communication and how they all said the two understand each other without words. And I'm sure this mess made their communication now really unique. And come on Jazzy, you are not stupid...
Anyway you just want to give them a big hug and say, all will be alright in the end.

As I said you before already, OMG honey the scene, where he looked out the window and with his back to Alice was soooooo in my imagination, when they met again in the kitchen. Also that she would be the person, who would begin to say something. I really could not believe my luck to really read this. *AWWWWW* *melt*

And *awww* to her and his words. It is so heartbreaking again. *hanky*

I really love their whole conversation in the kitchen. *sniffle*
Also that you mentioned Rose and Emmetts comments again. Just so wonderful included again. And *lol* to Rose was never good with taking orders. :D Anyway all is in the open at the end. Very good, they both suffered so much the whole time.
Also good to know, why Maria was not mentioned before and why she was not in his book. And it is so good, that Maria can not cause more problems for people.

Anyway it is all so awesome and it is so understandable that he needs some time to get over it and that Alice think she made the biggest mistake etc. *hanky again* Really so understandable his words + emotions and Alice feelings + words etc... *awww* I really need here a very big hanky.
But *AWWWWWWWWWWWWW* where he kissed her. *STRIKE* :D And very good that she brought the baby monitor with her before. ;)

I loved his line, that he was unsure where to put his hands etc, but wanted her so desperately much. Also that Alice helped and said to him it is ok and she wanted him desperately too. This lines were so awesome: “Upstairs,” kiss, “sleeping,” kiss. etc + “Yup, the doctor said 6 to 8 weeks, and it has been 12 already. Now stop talking,”
Anyway OMG, I'm so thankful that I can read this part too. *lol* Just wow, the whole sex part was so wonderful perfect written and also so full of emotions...for the readers and of course for Alice and Jasper.
I mean this combination of their open talk etc and then the HOT sex...this must be the apparentness for them after so much time. ;)

Anyway Mon I love it really to pieces and it is brilliant and wonderful, when a writer with his ff can trigger so much emotions. *sniffle* And believe me, you really can. :)

[realynn8]

Squee, part 2! :):)

Me, too, sweetie. I just want to make them happy and content again, they deserve it so much. And in my opinion they have suffered enough already, they don't need additional punishment.

I am so glad you liked the window scene. I could see him so clearly, standing there, looking out and thinking. :) You are very welcome, hun, I am just happy I could make you smile.

They are both so regretful and broken. They want to apologize and to somehow fix their pasts. They are both so sad.

I didn't want this story to revolve around Maria too much, therefore I have put her into an asylum, where she is going to stay. She won't hurt anyone anymore.

I think he needed to kiss her, to touch her, to just feel her. They have been through so much and suffered more than most people, so they needed to feel close again. And Alice had to bring the baby monitor, because I want the story to be solid, and because I don't think Alice would forget about Amber. Even is Jasper does make your mind spin. :)

LOL I am glad you liked the sex scene and the conversation. :) This I the first time I have even attempted to write a smut scene, and I was really nervous about it. LOL I am glad it turned out ok and you enjoyed it. :)

Have a lovely day, sweetie. And thank you so much for the amazing review!

[frust_sheep]

Oh thank you so much that you gave them some peace. :D And yeah, they really suffered so so much already. *sniffle*

Oh yes, the window scene, oh my, this was so perfection at it's best. I really could already see this to happen in my mind and OMG it was so so overwhelming to read it. *squee* :D

Yeah, they are both so so sad etc, you really just want to give these two a big hug.

Oh good to know about Maria, that she can not hurt someone again.

Yeah, she would never forget her baby and I so agree on the part, too, that they needed the closeness so much, especially after so much time, hurt...

Oh honey, I really enjoyed and loved it so so much. :D Awesome work, it fits all perfectly. + this adult part make it still more spicier. ;) *lol*

I hope you have/had a lovely day, too. :)

[realynn8]

You're very welcome. :)

I am so glad you liked that. I just needed to write it like that, I had it in my head all day long, when I imagine the scenes after the fight.

Thank you so much for all your nice words, I am really happy you agree with my decisions and actually, think a lot like I do.

Thanks, bb. :) I will try to make it like that in the future chapters too.

Love you!

[frust_sheep]

It was really wonderful and awww you are too good honey and I so agree that it is so good, that we think a lot in the same way. Love you, too! :)

[realynn8]

Awww. :) *huggles*