Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 10

[realynn8]

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 10
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

Comments

[frust_sheep]

Yeah, now the review for chapter 10. I know I'm late again, but I hope it's ok. :)

Here we go:
Oh I love this song and the lyrics fits perfectly for this chapter. Great choice again hon. :) *melt*

Great to know, that there is a extra bed in her room. *lol*
I think it was not stupid Alice. I enjoyed your outburst very much. ;) But I would love to know too what he was thinking at that moment. *lol* And I hope we will. ;)

Loved the whole part about this: "we were three couples" and then her explanation about the day after their night on the roof. Also the sentence that a wall disappeared between them. I really can understand this. Before this happened both did always hide something, if it comes to their relationship. But wohoo about their make up for this against the wall. ;)
One comment: HOT. He is so HOT anyway. *lol*
And who would not be hungry for more? ;)

Emmett's and Rosalie's appearance was priceless. *lol* And a big grin to the bet with Edward.

Great that Jasper calmed Alice down, with his show up. But Alice thoughts are understandable that she is scared and that she is sad her parents do not care about her.

Jasper's support is so lovely and Alice comments about the babynames.
The line: “Does your husband plan on going with you in the delivery room?” Yes, yes, this was so obligate. *lol* I love that he struggled, where he answered this question and that he said he go with her, before she could ask.

Carlisle & Esme: The two are always awesome. They support and I'm really glad that they are there for Alice and for Jasper. Especially that Carlisle deliver the baby is great and the comments from Esme, especially that the explanation for her disappearance can wait.

Because of your writing we can feel with Alice and that's so great. When Rosalie came to Alice to support her too, some tears slipped. *lol* That's so in character of Rose, I think. + The description of the birth was really wonderful and so full of emotion. Really awesome.

I can't help myself, but I so love Jaspers thoughts etc and that he could not stand seeing Alice in so much pain. And SQUEE, it's a baby girl and she looked like Alice. :D
I'm sure too, that Esme would pamper and spoil her. *lol*

Oh and Mon, I think the talk between Rosalie and Jasper was awesome. Especially that Jasper said to her, that the situation is not clear at all and that Rose should stay out of it. Also that Rose said she will stay the first night with Alice and that Alice asked first Jasper, if he wants wo hold the baby. Awww. You wrote his worry, thoughts and his doings wonderful and I love Alice choice of the name. So sweet and I think too Rose will be thrilled. *lol*

I love Alice comment to Jasper at the end and of course Jaspers comments about Amber Rose, that he will always be there for her and protect her. It's so brilliant also, that you include some lyrics of the song, that Jasper promised to teach her things and will show her the world. Very very fantastic idea. Loved how you showed Jasper and Amber Roses connection and that Jasper kissed Alice and called her darlin. Awww. :)

Anyway Mommy Alice with her daughter Amber Rose etc this chapter was brilliant as always honey and of course I can't wait for more. so so cute. :) I <3 it.

[realynn8]

What a perfect way to start a Sunday morning. :)

Thank you so so much, Lis. As always your review made my day. And no worried about when you review, as I have already told, take all the time in the world you need, there is absolutely no rush, especially since your reviews are definitely worth the wait. :) *squee*

I am so glad you liked the song, I am always glad when I read that. I think it fits well, although it was written for a boy, but who cares.

I am so glad you enjoyed the little scene on the roof. :) More and more scenes like that one will soon start to appear. ;) Cause really, who can say no to Jazz?

I am glad you liked Rosalie and Emmett in this chapter, and also the bet. I tried to make Emmett as much in character as possible, and I hope I succeeded. :)

I am also glad you liked Esme and Carlisle. And of course Rosalie. I think it was pivotal for them to get into the story, because now they are all there and that makes the situation more real. And the birth itself was important, it pushed things more into perspective. And in motion.

I am so happy you like little Amber Rose. She is adorable, but I am a little biased. LOL And lets hope she will bring Jasper and Alice closer.

As we both know Jasper is very protective and when he saw how tiny and fragile Amber is, his (over)protective side took over. She already has him wrapper around her tiny finger. :)

Thank you so much for reading and for leaving me such a wonderful review! *hugs*

[frust_sheep]

I'm pleased, that I could help you to have a good Sunday morning. ;)

You are very welcome Mon. :)

I did not know, that it was written for a boy. But you are right, who cares. *lol* I just love that song and I really think, that it fit's perfectly here. Anyway because of this song I bought actually the album in the past. *lol*

Oh yes, the roof. :D Oh really? That makes me a very happy frust-sheep. *lol* Can't wait to read those scene's. ;)
I don't know, but I can definitive not say no to him. ;)

Oh yes, believe me you really succeeded. The whole scene with them was TOP and so so in character.

I loved that they are now in this story for real. You have them all wonderfully integrate and I so agree about the perspective.

*lol*, but then you can call me biased also. ;) She is just adorable and I'm sure she can do this. :)

Aww, this was so so cute. I loved that whole scene. Really. He showed so much that he is so protective of her, even when Amber Rose had not grabbed his finger already at the hospital. I was sure, that she would wrapp him around her little finger sooner or later. :D

For me it is always a pleasure to read something from you. *hugs you 2* :)

[realynn8]

You have the album? I have it, too. I loved Creed and was disappointed when they broke up, but I still like Alter Bridge now, it is the same group minus the singer Scott Stapp. Have you heard of it?

Yes, more is coming in a couple of chapters, things have been set into motion. :) You'll see what I mean tomorrow, when I update.

Thank you so so much, you can't even imagine what your words mean to me. *hugs*

[frust_sheep]

Yes. :) Oh that's great Mon. We have so much in common. *lol* And yeah I have heard of Alter Bridge, too. :)
But I agree, it's often disappointing, if someone left a band.
Hm, do you know "Red" (for example: Breathe Into Me) or "Cold" (A Different Kind Of Pain). Maybe it would be something for you. :)

Oh cool *jumps up and down* :D , I'm so excited already. *lol*

:)

[realynn8]

We do. :)

Thank you so much for the suggestion, I didn't know them before, but I love the songs. :) *hugs* New music, I love it! *excited*

[frust_sheep]

:)
You are welcome :) and great, that you love the songs. I found them per youtube 2007 or 2008 and then I bought the cd. *lol*

[realynn8]

I just realized I have a couple of their (Cold) songs on my computer, just different ones. And I didn't even realize it before. :) LOL

[frust_sheep]

*lol* and that's cool. :) Till now I just have only one cd. So it's not much. Maybe I will buy more someday. :)