FIC: Satisfaction (Pockyverse)

Jun 09, 2007 16:38



Title: Satisfaction
Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Genma, Raido, various OCs
Genre: Character Study sort of, a little angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mentions of violence, death, drinking and sex, potty-mouths,
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto. Masashi Kishimoto does, along with whatever other people/entities are along for the ride.

A/N: Written back ( Read more... )

genma, pockyverse, raido, naruto, fanfic, genrai

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splashcore June 10 2007, 02:45:28 UTC
Shino's gonna kill Genma.

I liked this. It makes me want to write my short fic about why Hayate coughs so much.

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realnobiki June 10 2007, 04:42:13 UTC
thanks, i'm glad! don't know if genma would care if shino was mad or not, but shino's dad - that would be an interesting conversation because shino's dad is mega-scary.

*sidles closer* soooo, what would i have to do to get you to write your hayate fic? hmmm? because i'm all about encouragment... *innocent smile*

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splashcore June 10 2007, 04:55:50 UTC
That's probably all you'd have to do, actually.

The problem is, it's a rather difficult idea to portray. I've been thinking about it and analyzing myself, too, trying to figure out how to write it--because it's actually based on a habit I developed in high school (a strange coughing habit obviously).

Another problem is that I don't know a lot of the "random ninja" characters at all. Who do you think would be Hayate's loudest friend during his time at the Academy? That would definitely help if I knew that. I need to research his character.

Hmm, but since it's probably going to be rather short, I might start working on it soon. As in, tonight or tomorrow.

And speaking of Shino, I was also having fun getting inside his head in this Kiba/Shino fic I'm half-assedly working on.

By the way, I'm a boy. Just so you know (was looking at your icon just now, lol).

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realnobiki June 10 2007, 05:27:05 UTC
huh, it's the only genma icon i have *i fail*, but that does make my flirty-innuendo just a TAD squicky...*shrugs* whatever, now you write...

hayate is supposedly a year younger than kotetsu, izumo and anko, so of those i would choose anko or kotetsu (anko is loud, kotetsu is whiny). wish i could find the link to the fanbook translations i had saved (before bad sector aliens invaded my laptop) so i could add more.

oh hey, your kiba 24hr fic, yeah. ummm, i'm kinda stuck. got through the first two, but the word 'carbuncles' left me catatonic, so i'll have to read the rest later. you rule!

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splashcore June 10 2007, 05:44:21 UTC
Oh, it gets much, much worse. I apologize if that's your first impression of my writing. That's a part of my insane series called El Mundo Loco. I let go in those completely, I do a lot of bashing, and I parody the hell out of everything. If you're looking for something a little saner, look into the KibaNaru adventures. They're like action-filled/plot-driven Naruto episodes with Kiba and Naruto as lovers (yaoi adventures). I tend to write comically no matter what I'm doing, though.

And yeah, I just read up on those ages and stuff; I think I'll use Kotetsu and Iruka as his friends back then (Kotetsu being the loud one, of course). I'd use Anko, but I think she was off getting snake-raped by Orochimaru and all that at the time, so yeah.

Hmm, and I'm getting really interested in writing some stuff like those needle-fighting scenes you wrote. Don't be surprised if my Hayate fic has some echoes of yours, though he'll be using swords instead, of course!

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