Breaking Bad Fic: Killing Time (Just Don't Leave), Parts 1-2

[readishmael]

Fandom: Breaking Bad
Title: Killing Time (Just Don't Leave)
Author: readishmael 
Pairing: Walt/Jesse
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~20,750
Spoilers: Through 3x13, “Full Measure”
Disclaimer: This is for fun, not for profit. No copyright infringement is intended. Breaking Bad belongs to Vince Gilligan, AMC, and Sony Television.
Warnings: Angst; emotional abuse; serious

Comments

[sydpenguinbunny]

Oh my God, THIS. This has made my night. Cannot wait to read the rest of this tomorrow (before "Salud"! *dissolves into a puddle of worried-for-Jesse*) So much that I love about this... Awkward sex, awkward morning after, a kiss that I squeed at, poor Jesse breaking my heart because it's so obvious that he needs to be wanted very much <3 Rawwr so much awesome in here. *glomps story* That was probably rambly, but just... love. Love love love :D

[readishmael]

Thanks so much! I, uh...hope you still feel the same way when you see where it goes, if anything here really made you squee.

poor Jesse breaking my heart because it's so obvious that he needs to be wanted very much

And will damage himself in whatever way he has to to be able to feel that. Poor, sweet, screwed-up boy.

[sydpenguinbunny]

Well, I have a distinct feeling that Walt/Jesse is likely to always end badly, as I don't know if they're necessarily conducive to fluff... It's all very dysfunctional but... necessary :D

*hugs Jesse* I know :( Jesse is in desperate need of affection. We need a Hug Jesse Pinkman Association. :D

[readishmael]

No, they're not conducive to fluff, at least when you extend the timeline. Fluffy moments or scenes, maybe, with proper justification, but not for the whole course of a relationship.

We need a Hug Jesse Pinkman Association. :D

And like 99% of BB fans would join. He'd have no time for anything else except to gets hugs.

[sydpenguinbunny]

Well, I kind of prefer it that way. I'm not a big fan of straight-up fluff that extends for way too long (I also write in the House fandom and a lot of House/Cameron and House/Cuddy degenerate into this and How-many-babies-can-they-have)... Conflict is what makes stories interesting :D

Haha yes... And Jesse would be a little frightened to walk out his house and have a million people all trying to hug him at once! :D (And Andrea might get jealous :D)

[readishmael]

Hee, now I kind of want to read (or write) crackfic about BB fans all mobbing Jesse, trying to hug him and generally coddle him and coo over him the way we all tend to do.