Fanfic: "City of a Thousand Wonders" by Shalott . [RPS: Kris/Adam, AUish] . [N6]
Fanfic: "City of a Thousand Wonders" by Shalott . [RPS: Kris/Adam, AUish] . [N6]
First read: 21.09.2009
Comments: 15w. Ok, I don't know what happened here because I thought this fic was totally insane, it wasn't crack and it's not the concepts, it's the characterization. That's how Shalott usually sells you the clichéd plots, the impossible feats of bravery, all of it. It's like she took the plot and the world so far away from reality but this time she also took the characters there and I can't see anything of me in them. I don't understand their motivations or their feelings, the resolution of the story is sketchy and too fast, the secondary characters feel even less alive than Kris and Adam, Katy in particular makes very little sense to me (spoiler: why doesn't she care at all about Kris? Not even to be relieved he miraculously got out alive?I can understand their marriage being fake but don't they live together and know each other from the organization?) .
2009: rps fic, rps fic, fanfic-2009, 2009, @read in english, fanfiction, rps fic: adam lambert/kris allen, *fanfic-novelette-2009, author: shalott
First read: 21.09.2009
Comments: 15w. Ok, I don't know what happened here because I thought this fic was totally insane, it wasn't crack and it's not the concepts, it's the characterization. That's how Shalott usually sells you the clichéd plots, the impossible feats of bravery, all of it. It's like she took the plot and the world so far away from reality but this time she also took the characters there and I can't see anything of me in them. I don't understand their motivations or their feelings, the resolution of the story is sketchy and too fast, the secondary characters feel even less alive than Kris and Adam, Katy in particular makes very little sense to me (spoiler: why doesn't she care at all about Kris? Not even to be relieved he miraculously got out alive?I can understand their marriage being fake but don't they live together and know each other from the organization?) .
2009: rps fic, rps fic, fanfic-2009, 2009, @read in english, fanfiction, rps fic: adam lambert/kris allen, *fanfic-novelette-2009, author: shalott