But I'm invisible...

[readingissexxy]

I walk
I run
They see me
But I'm invisible

I talk
I scream
They hear me
But I'm invisible

I hug
I kiss
They feel me
But I'm invisible

So i looked in the mirror
To see myself
I saw nothing
For I'm still invisible

Comments

[mimi_snuggles]

I thought they were way to harsh when commenting in writers_guild. I thought it sounded like something that would echo a diary, but the only thing I would have added was more questions. Why invisible? What makes you seem invisible? Things like that would "flesh" it out more. I still liked it though...