And this part: "He wanted to feel his pains. He had earned them. Minor though his injuries were compared to the catalogue Dean had already endured and healed from,..."
Great line.
Would you consider writing this incident from Dean's POV? Because just from the words he says here his pain is palpable.
And I'm sad that there's only going to be one more part :(
I might try it. I'll be honest: I find Dean hard, much harder than Sam to write, because whilst I like him, I don't identify with him at all. I understand his motivations (sometimes), but I don't empathise with them. Still I might give it a go. Thanks for commenting! x
Despite your above comment, I think you write Dean [and Sam, of course] quite well. Really, it's Dean's love for Sam that anchors these stories you're writing... they are so good, so heartbreaking.... thank you!!
Probly not in this fic....that whole ep didn't make much of an impression on me. Maybe I was just tired/distracted though. P'raps if I see it again. Ty for comment! x
I'm enjoying this story very much. Sam's emotions seem to ring true with what I've seen of his character. He's driven to do things and he doesn't always understand why, but he's too stubborn to back away. Poor Sam. ;-) Thanks for sharing.
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And this part:
"He wanted to feel his pains. He had earned them. Minor though his injuries were compared to the catalogue Dean had already endured and healed from,..."
Great line.
Would you consider writing this incident from Dean's POV? Because just from the words he says here his pain is palpable.
And I'm sad that there's only going to be one more part :(
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When he wonders if the police woman would want him I nearly cried.
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