Oh OK... I was a bit disturbed, and since I have around 100 tabs open at all times, I wanted to check XD
Anyway, congrats for your first big bang! This was quite lovely, and I didn't get to comment since I read it on AO3 while LJ was down, but if I re-read it, I'll be sure to do it!
Hi! First of all, I loved the summary and the whole idea of this fic. Your writing style is a lot of fun to read and I loved your descriptions which were at times really creative and smart. The pace of the story was good and I really liked the dialogue
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It wasn't really my beta's fault. I was having computer problems the day of posting and somehow I lost my edited copy but I didn't want to miss posting. The story is being beta'd again and I'min the process of editing and will be positing the new edited chapters when I get them back.
And thank you for your comment,I can't learn and fix my mistakes if I don't know about them xD
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I already read this on AO3 before... Is it a new version?
Anyway liked it a lot the first time I read it ^^
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Anyway, congrats for your first big bang! This was quite lovely, and I didn't get to comment since I read it on AO3 while LJ was down, but if I re-read it, I'll be sure to do it!
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Damn, and I was going to sleep (:
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And thank you for your comment,I can't learn and fix my mistakes if I don't know about them xD
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