Premeditated Chapter 21

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Comments

[maldeluxx]

The visuals about all the lines and circles sound awesome. I enjoyed the talk between Reid and Garcia a lot, too :D

[rbnnybt]

I really like it when Reid does his "equations in air" thing, where everything goes black except for him and his visualizations. They should do more of it on the show. Visualizations and stabbing.

[freddlerabbit]

I love how finely you alternate between hilarious (the Staples "easy" button, for the love of God!) and terrifying. Serial Killer Spencer is spine-chilling.

[rbnnybt]

Easy! Easy! Easy! Dammit, it didn't work to generate the next chapter. Stupid Staples easy button. False advertising. I want my money back.