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razycrandomgirl

Supply Closet (fic)

Jun 29, 2006 21:08

Title: Supply Closet
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fanfiction, wash, fanfic, serenity, zoe, wash/zoe, firefly

Comments 36

stormkpr June 30 2006, 02:26:03 UTC

I am SO honored that this is dedicated to me! Wow! Thank you so much. I am glad that I helped inspire you to write.

I like this fic a lot. It's a very plausible look at how they may've gotten together in the first place. I like lines such as ""If this is the kind of treatment that's expected after an injury then I should hurt myself more often." -- Vintage Wash!

I also like Mal's line at the end -- that sounds just like him. You did a great job keeping everyone in character. And if you're inspired to write more fanfic, I am behind that 100%!

razycrandomgirl June 30 2006, 02:34:20 UTC

-falls all over self and beams- You are too kind! Thank you! I don't know what to say. This is all you, baby!

stormkpr June 30 2006, 02:41:35 UTC

I forgot to mention that I also liked their flirting and touching, all in the face of his pain.

And I liked the line, "What is this place exactly?" The pacing of that was perfect. :)

razycrandomgirl June 30 2006, 03:53:28 UTC

Well, Wash is my very favorite Whedon character. I like to pretend that I know him a little bit.
Can't wait for your stuff. -winks-

damn_hero_zoe June 30 2006, 02:34:18 UTC

It was a pleasure to beta and I completely agree with stormkpr's comments. Right on the money with your voices.

razycrandomgirl June 30 2006, 17:46:26 UTC

Yes, well sometime the characters live in my head nad it get really crowded. This is a nice result of me letting them roam free for a bit. Thanks again, and please know if I can help you out with anything!

-hugs- Everyone here's so nice!

thegranddewru June 30 2006, 04:43:15 UTC

FUN!

razycrandomgirl June 30 2006, 04:50:09 UTC

Thanks for your review!

xandri June 30 2006, 05:42:44 UTC

Oh, that ending is hilarious. XD

razycrandomgirl June 30 2006, 17:52:12 UTC

Yeah. Mal just came out of no where. That wasn't even in the original.

And thank you. :-D

sarahetc June 30 2006, 11:53:43 UTC

Oh, I love the dialogue! Especially "extraordinary male physic." The back and forth is fantastic. So is the kissing!

razycrandomgirl June 30 2006, 18:00:06 UTC

It's all from you guys. I get all my "experience" from reading.

Oh, I love the dialogue! Especially "extraordinary male physic."

-snickering- Yeah, that's so "Wash". -pet him-