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razycrandomgirl

Wallet With a Blue Rubber Band (fic)

Oct 27, 2009 01:43

Title: Wallet with a Blue Rubber Band.

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: G

Word Count: 1300

Characters/Pairings: Elle, Maya (Inc.)

Disclaimer: Don’t own.

Spoilers/Time Line: none really.

Summery: Wallet found.

Author’s Notes: I don't even know. I guess for superkappa who wanted buddy fic with Maya and Elle. It can be done. Unbeta'd

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Comments 21

superkappa October 27 2009, 06:36:59 UTC

First of all, I kind of love that Elle's son was named Bobby. I could totally see her naming a kid after her dad, even though her father was a total douchebag to her. Because she still loved him.

Also, I like the sense of family here. And that it was just the women and the children. Who the fathers are or aren't is kind irrelevant, which is nice, though we are given hints about their identities.

And I'm...rambling. I'm sorry. I shouldn't comment when tipsy, probably. Oh well.

razycrandomgirl October 27 2009, 06:43:42 UTC

He was a total Douche, but she loved him. And I think she is only left thinking about how much she loved him and vice versa. The chooses to think fondly of him. And I think that's good for her

I didn't want to say too much. ;)

I like he rambling. Thanks Katie, you super fast commenter. *hugs*

superkappa October 27 2009, 06:50:32 UTC

It probably helps that she can't remember half of what he did to her. I always wish they hadn't killed him off so quickly (though I know Stephen Tobolwsky had a spinal injury at the time, which was a major reason) because I wanted to see that storyline explored more. Like what if Elle got those memories back? *sighs* Heroes had so many lost opportunities.

Less is more :)

*hugs* I stalk lj and read fast. It helps.

razycrandomgirl October 27 2009, 06:54:50 UTC

I don't even wanna think about Heroes fail right now.

But I'm happy Stephen's better. \o/

I know what you mean. Me and F5 are like this *crosses fingers*.

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gimmemypickle October 27 2009, 06:51:12 UTC

This is lovely! All those little details you add to your stories. *happy sigh* And Maya and Elle's friendship and their banter! And the adorable kids! And Gabriel/Clark Kent comparison! And how real it all feels!

You have reduced me to exclamations. :P

razycrandomgirl October 30 2009, 05:02:33 UTC

Aww thank you! *smooches*

eternal_moonie October 27 2009, 08:46:45 UTC

totally loved this story! Well done!

razycrandomgirl October 30 2009, 03:58:36 UTC

:D thank you! :D

albion1919 October 27 2009, 09:28:19 UTC

Aww that was so sweet!!! God, it's so nice to read happy fic.

I like that it was about them and their kids then about the fathers. Though the picture in the wallet was a nice touch.

So they both don't remember?

Lovely! ^_^

razycrandomgirl October 30 2009, 04:03:52 UTC

:D Thank you! *super cheesy face*

that is right. *nod* Scott free! ;)

*Annie smiles*

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lemomina October 27 2009, 15:19:09 UTC

Dude , Friendship fic is SUPER CUTE XD

And the Kiddies <333

Did i see a hint of Mr. Gray ?! LOL

razycrandomgirl October 30 2009, 04:27:36 UTC

Thank you! There should be more, cause I think the could get along. They need more female interaction on the show.