The Final Nail (fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: The Final Nail

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: Barely PG-13

Characters/Pairings: Maya/Sylar, Mohinder, Molly

Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Just like to play with them sometimes.

Spoilers/Time Line: Vol. 2 "Truth & Consequence" and "Powerless"

Summery: In NY. The drive to Mohinder's lab.

Author’s Notes: Thanks togimmemypicklefor beta

Comments

[leoprincess]

O_O

Where did Gabriel go?

He went crazy and truned into Sylar? O_o

[razycrandomgirl]

LMAO! I love you.

I'd been wondering about that for most vol. 2.

I miss Gabe.

[albion1919]

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! \o/

He could feel it. He could feel her holding it inside and a rush of irrational pride burst within of him.

I love that, he so would feel proud because he had a hand in her gaining control!

“So don’t force my hand.” He pushed his point by brushing his hand against the material covering her legs. “Or is that what you want?” He moved closer, mouth near her ear. “My hands were always faster than your powers.”

Guh and creepy because he's being threatening. I love that, who's got the faster trigger... ;)

I love the tension, fear, anger and UST.

he never had any real control over her. He could only make her do the things she already wanted to do.

YUS! Totally! And the fact that he wants to be special and she wants to be normal.

This whole series was so great! I wish it had gone this way, where he's actually feeling some conflict.

[razycrandomgirl]

I feel like he was trying to figure a way to keep her from the start (even though he made that stupid speech about killing her). He kept trying to convince her that having power was a good thing. He even got her excited over the fact that he helped her to control her powers.

Maybe that was him trying to prepare his alternate plan.

*shakes head* Boy oh boy did he make his bed. tsk tsk.

FINALLY FINISHED! *HAPPY DANCE!*

Thank you, thank you, thank you Tammy! *tackle hugs*

[albion1919]

(he made that statement and then back tracked to the possibility of keeping her) Yeah I agree the way he was trying to get her to change her mind about her powers could have been his way of justifying keeping her.

*nods* Yeah definitely, he best watch himself now...

\o/ It’s a nice feeling completing a fic series!

Awww thank you! *hugs*

[sinemoras09]

Wow! I loved it!! What a great way to end the series. Soooo angsty and full of UST! You do a great job of creating tension between the characters. Great job!! :D

[razycrandomgirl]

You are too kind Ma cherie! I feel good about finishing it (finally)!

I'm a hopeless procrastinator. *face palm* Thanks! I love UST and angst. My favorites!

[gimmemypickle]

I think this is my very favorite part. I loved how it's like a filler for what we didn't see in that episode. Also love the insight into Sylar's twisted mind and how Maya sticks up for herself. Yay for Maya! I think you've got great characterizations and a lovely way with words. :-)

[razycrandomgirl]

*blushes and flails!*

you are too kind to me my dear Rachel. Thank you so very much for all your help. It would have been a mess with out you, Doll.

*bear hugs*

lol Dude, that icon! lol

and thank you YAY!

Maya's not taking crap from him, if she can help it. ;)

I like it when Maya fights him (I think Gabe/Sylar likes it too. XD)

[gimmemypickle]

*big hugs* It was my pleasure.

You know he does. He's a little masochist.

Re: Icon

[razycrandomgirl]

smexy icon!

and yes he is.

[dream_infinity0]

another great chapter... poor maya thro.....

great work again

[razycrandomgirl]

thank ya thank ya. :D