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Fic: Plan B

May 29, 2012 07:41

Title: Plan B
Format: One-shot, approx 2,000 words
Author: Raynesupreme
Disclaimer: If I owned this, I could quit my day job.
A/N: Just a little idea that wouldn't go away. Pretty funny, if I do say so myself.

Jayne knew he weren’t one for strategy but this weren’t gonna just fix itself.
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Comments 6

eneumann May 30 2012, 00:02:55 UTC

This was adorable! I love it! :) (The marriage part kinda surprised me, but I can totally see it)

raynesupreme May 30 2012, 00:30:50 UTC

Thanks! It kind of makes me snicker.

irishbrneyes May 30 2012, 03:46:49 UTC

Great story! I'm laughin' my ass off over here! Where do you get all these great ideas from? I think I need my muse to talk to yours cause mine is ignoring me. Next please!

raynesupreme May 30 2012, 07:19:48 UTC

Well, start with being depressed and then mix in a relatively unhealthy obsession with fictional character. Toss in a bit of a daily commute in Southern California and, Voila, instant Muse. (Also helps to have a 4-year old that is solidly entrenched in imaginative play 18 hours a day!) I'm glad I could make you laugh!

irishbrneyes May 31 2012, 00:10:33 UTC

Depressed-check; obession w/fictional character-check. Seattle traffic is just as bad, can't do anything about the 4-year old, but I do have teenagers! I'm sure I'll get it together some how! :-)

Plan "A" Needs Work, Amigo general_iblis April 26 2013, 02:47:30 UTC

Yeah, Jayne...your Plan As are almost as bad as Mal's can be, and that's saying something!

;P

Utter spectacular work, especially the misdirection via Jayne's POV when buying the engagement ring - love the ruby, BTW, since it's Summer and my own birth stone (July = ruby) - but his confrontation with River in the galley was just comedic romance gold :D