Comments | rayne_y_daze: Another entry for the first time sex challenge

rayne_y_daze

Another entry for the first time sex challenge

Aug 24, 2005 09:36

*gulp* Everyone remember my mention of frimfram's First Time with Spike Sex-athon? Well, I have another entry, and it's a wild departure from my normal style. Please bear that in mind when you're reading, 'cause this time? When I say NC-17? Believe me! But you know I had to let Ethan have some fun ( Read more... )

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helenkacan August 24 2005, 17:06:26 UTC

Hee! The little barracuda just barely escaped.

That was SO much fun.

Hugs,
H.

rayne_y_daze August 24 2005, 17:12:29 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it. *hug*

jans_intentions August 24 2005, 17:07:41 UTC

Ooooo, wonderful entry. I loved this pairing, which is unusual and the very sexy and dangerous adventure. Very believable with cannon.

rayne_y_daze August 24 2005, 17:14:11 UTC

Thank you so much! This ficathon is a lot of fun - and a great excuse to exercise those smut muscles. :-)

kidcyclone August 24 2005, 17:24:35 UTC

Whooooa. Verrrrrry nice, pet. >

I loved this trio. Dominant Spike and deliciously sensual Dru, having fun with the slippery young Ethan was very fun to read, and very well drawn. Your use of visuals is terrific, I could see the action before me. I really liked the dialogue and Spike's inner monologue as well. Thank you!

rayne_y_daze August 24 2005, 17:31:42 UTC

Thank you so much! I had fun writing it - raging embarrassment and all. ;-)

sueworld2003 August 24 2005, 17:41:13 UTC

Oh I loved this!

I adore the pairing of Spike/Ethan so this was a terrific treat for me.

Wonderfully written as well.

rayne_y_daze August 24 2005, 18:02:40 UTC

Thank you! :-) I had honestly never thought of this pairing much beyond Te's "Brass" before I heard of an archive dedicated to that pairing. I pimped it in my journal a while ago...it's called Modified Behavior. Some pretty cool stuff out that way.

shapinglight August 24 2005, 17:58:03 UTC

That was terrific and sexy as hell, and so very Dru, and this Drusilla trailed off in a flurry of giggles that sounded vaguely like Satan had learned to play wind chimes.. was superb.

I can just hear her.

rayne_y_daze August 24 2005, 18:06:51 UTC

::hugs you:: You have no idea how big I'm smiling right now - I spent a fair chunk of the morning trying to come up with an apt description of her laugh! Thank you for reading!