Little Girl Lost

Aug 28, 2010 20:30

A plot bunny attacked and gave me this idea for a River centric AU story. My idea of what might happen if River didn't go to the Academy and then ran away from home. Eventual Rayne.

Little Girl Lost )

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goddessofbirth August 29 2010, 00:42:37 UTC
I'm very interested to see where this leads!

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night_lotus August 29 2010, 02:12:08 UTC
This has all kinds of great potential!

I certainly hope your bunnies encourage you to write more.

I can certainly see fugitive River fitting in with a bunch of rag tag space pirates.

Loving this so far!

-NL

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general_iblis August 29 2010, 05:25:32 UTC
Well now...I have to say this tale raise an interesting question: if River did have some already-active psychic abilities BEFORE she went to the Academy, why didn't she clue in "for real" (aka in the canon time/storyline)? Can't imagine someone like Dr. Matthias NOT giving off creepy vibes when talking to an obvious candidate for the program to create whatever the final result was gonna be for River.

Still, all kinds of intrigued by this and I can't wait to see more, vt_browncoat!

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sunshineali August 29 2010, 05:27:58 UTC
I'm loving this and can't wait to see what happens next. I also can't wait until that creepy Jake Tebbits meets Mr. Jayne-fucking-bad-ass-Cobb.

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basched August 29 2010, 05:32:47 UTC
This is a good start....most intrigued to see where you take it. :)

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