Copper for a Kiss Mini-Challenge, Prompt #8 Proof

Jul 28, 2008 11:39

Title: Tuesday Night
Author: Lauren, a.k.a. how_obscure
Disclaimer: I don’t own the rights to Firefly. Comments and joy are my only profit.
Rating: G
Length: Drabble x 1.6, 160 words
Author’s Notes: This is for the mini-challenge at rayne_shippers. My prompt was #8, proof. It’s a fluffy sort of fairytale, which I churned out very quickly because I was going away for ( Read more... )

2008: drabble (100-300 words), 2008: copper for a kiss challenges

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gilove2dance July 28 2008, 17:16:49 UTC
SQUEE! Love love love! But you must write a sequel on HOW he prooved it! Cause we love it when he prooves it to her.

*happy sigh* Wicked description and all....brilliantly written.

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how_obscure July 28 2008, 17:21:45 UTC
I am beaming right now. Thanks for such a wonderful review!

I'm not sure I'm up to writing a sequel though. I don't even know for sure how he proved it. Sweet? Smutty? I may just leave it up to your imagination. ;)

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sunshineali July 28 2008, 18:18:43 UTC
Oh Man, I agree with gilove2dance, SQUEEEEEE indeed. This is great and I want to know what happened (stomps foot on ground) :)Ali

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how_obscure July 29 2008, 00:55:34 UTC
Thank you for the SQUEE. :) Unfortunately, I don't think I will be able to appease you; this will probably remain a one-shot deal.

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marta_hari July 28 2008, 18:40:35 UTC
Oooh, that was shiny. I like the saner yet still river-esque head space you wrote it in. Lovely and abstract and true, like all art.

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how_obscure July 29 2008, 00:56:40 UTC
Like art? Shiny! Glad you liked it. :)

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idyllictorture July 28 2008, 20:10:23 UTC
Very cool fic. I loved how we could decide for ourselves what happened. The sweetness, or smuttiness is beautifully implied.

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how_obscure July 29 2008, 00:59:06 UTC
Thanks. I like open-ended endings sometimes. I'm glad to know some others do as well. :)

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heron_advocate July 28 2008, 20:52:16 UTC
Wow, this is pretty amazing for something you just threw together. :) I like it muchly.

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how_obscure July 29 2008, 00:59:43 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad it turned out. :)

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