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Nov 25, 2009 22:16

Title: An Important Date
Author: Ree
Theme: Mamoru/ anniversary
Genre: General/humor
Version: Manga/Anime
Rating: G

Not mine, not yours (unless you're HER), but at least Takeuchi Naoko hasn't said we can't play.

( An Important Date )

nov'09, anniversary, mamoru

Comments 6

jenbunny November 26 2009, 06:47:17 UTC

hehehe loved it ^_^ cute cute cute

sheankelor November 26 2009, 14:08:02 UTC

Do you think I should add a bit more disbelief in for Usagi? I feel like her reaction was lacking, but I am still uncertain how to improve it. Opinions?

Glad you loved it.^-~

jenbunny November 26 2009, 20:10:51 UTC

hmmm, I don't know. I didn't really feel like her reaction was lacking anything. I suppose a little more disbelief would be ok, but like I said I had enjoyed it the way that it was.

sheankelor November 27 2009, 21:06:52 UTC

If you say it is good, then it will stay this way until Raya or Senium says otherwise. ^-^

seniumboy December 24 2009, 07:29:08 UTC

Lol a guy would not remember something like that :p

Well no, I suppose some would. This is a very cute story and it's funny to see Mamoru stump Usagi like that. Only thing I could suggest to this would be to mention that he remembered the number score Usagi made on that test.

sheankelor December 24 2009, 19:30:24 UTC

The score... yeah that score might be really good to add. And Mamoru is Mamoru.. he would remember something like that... or he would make it up just to pick on Usagi. ^-^