Title: Morning work
Author: Ree
Theme: Chibi-Usa (spiritual)
Genre: General
Version: Anime/Manga Crystal Tokyo
Rating: G
This lovely child and her friends were the creations of Takeuchi Naoko. I am just playing with some really nice dolls. ( And hiding them from my daughter and niece.^-^)
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Morning work )
without all the hoopla of battle and danger.
Does he know she's the princess? It would be neat if he didn't, but how could he not? *bites back more babbling*
"Helios, you have to finish school. close quote, not apostrophe *smiles happily at firm, Papa-Endymion*
Usagi strained to hear what his answer would be. <-- You seem to be having a little trouble with that lately... ^-^
Mangaka-chan would be quick to tell you that in the anime they were amber, not light brown. And in the manga... I think I found that they were blue or grey? *sighs* I always have to check "Moonlit Sakura" to be sure what it was I found... Wine? I think they were wine colored... *is still not sure even though she re-read most of "Moonlit Sakura" less than a week ago to find just that detail.*
HTML error in the last paragraph, dearling.
'extra space It is big, but most of the bulk is above the ground, but it's roots are...' <-- Two buts? No ands? Seems a bit... twisted. hard to understand.
The Golden Crystal is mostly below ground? Are we capitalizing all of them? If so, you missed some in the beginning of the paragraph. Actually, only the last reference to each is capitalized.
*sighs happily that she can go to the next chapter*
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And what is fascinating? ^-^ (waits curiously to see what I thought of that intrigued Raya)
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And she wouldn't fight too hard with you, but it is one of her pet peeves, and since I just found her on LJ I remembered that. She's the one who was second beta-ing Sisters for me.
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