*hums thoughtfully* I think so... I would look it up, but I'm too far away. You should have asked on Saturday! ^-^
Sneaky. You tricked me into reading a fic at work! *laughs* So, I'm not the only one inspired by ChibiUsa and filk. *grins evily* Ettiquite... Never Set the Cat on Fire... *more laughter*
I'll catch up sometime this week if I can. I was still mostly computerless at home and distracted by the bound word for most of the weekend, but I did see that you had added two for my pleasure on Saturday. And now, two more.
In the next to last paragraph, you use ChibiUsa instead of Usagi. And "were floating too near the surface." Finally, a comma error in the last line of Mother's stanza (extra space).
Lyrics are by Misty, not Leslie. Leslie just sang it. Also, you should probably look up the proper way to reference the song title (I know, I know, pot calling the kettle black). If italicized, you should unitalicize it in your note.
Tilting her head this way and that she eventually pinpointed or was eventually able to pinpoint the general direction.
As she heading down the right hand path <-- headed? was heading?
Western wind, blow stark, blow strong? You have the lyrics available, I don't... But that's the way I remember singing it. ;)
Trapped in stone? Or crystal?
Crone comma? I need not call you twice. To my foes? bring the cold of death!
A very quick, very brief internet search says that A does indeed equal American.
^-^ I might change the Ettiquite story. And Ballroom. Lady is putting these little thoughts of a boring international trip in for them and Government. We'll see... But, I'll still write it. Just not for Ettiquite. Might work better that way, actually, hahaha.
Weird but I agree.. I remember singing that word too, but it is not in the lyrics. And I'm awaiting the stories, but I will be patient, very patient...
And patient and patient and patient... *giggles* Maybe Leslie sang it even though it wasn't officially there? Or we just added it because it sounded right.
Sneaky. You tricked me into reading a fic at work! *laughs* So, I'm not the only one inspired by ChibiUsa and filk. *grins evily* Ettiquite... Never Set the Cat on Fire... *more laughter*
I'll catch up sometime this week if I can. I was still mostly computerless at home and distracted by the bound word for most of the weekend, but I did see that you had added two for my pleasure on Saturday. And now, two more.
In the next to last paragraph, you use ChibiUsa instead of Usagi. And "were floating too near the surface." Finally, a comma error in the last line of Mother's stanza (extra space).
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Thanks!!! And Never set the cat on fire and Ettiquite? Cool.. Daddy's Little Girl too! I'm looking forward to your writing. ^-^
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Tilting her head this way and that she eventually pinpointed or was eventually able to pinpoint the general direction.
As she heading down the right hand path <-- headed? was heading?
Western wind, blow stark, blow strong? You have the lyrics available, I don't... But that's the way I remember singing it. ;)
Trapped in stone? Or crystal?
Crone comma? I need not call you twice.
To my foes? bring the cold of death!
A very quick, very brief internet search says that A does indeed equal American.
^-^ I might change the Ettiquite story. And Ballroom. Lady is putting these little thoughts of a boring international trip in for them and Government. We'll see... But, I'll still write it. Just not for Ettiquite. Might work better that way, actually, hahaha.
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