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[sheankelor]

Title: Follow - Fated meeting part 5
Author: Ree
Theme: Shitennou ("Don't follow titles, follow courage)
Genre: General
Version: Manga/Anime Crystal Tokyo
Rating: G

Takeuchi Naoko had the wonderful imagination to create these gentlemen and their companions. I've just decided to borrow their look alike doubles and give them scripts.

Comments

[raya_light]

She spun about, and barely kept herself from glaring at the spirit. "I don't care about titles! 0close quote

He has plenty of that. He has faced more trial and tribulations, seen more destruction and death than anyone ought.

Somehow she was sure that he would know that and be happier that way. <-- What about her? Is she leaving family? The only place she has ever known? Or is her only tie to the place the earth spirit that draws her? Is it the only place she found that she could be treated as equal to a man? I.e., not put down or given the most menial chores because she was a woman? What does she have outside of Kunzite that has kept her here so long?

Reverently she picked up the shimmering white cloak, and stared at it and the stone. Deep in her heart comma she knew it was time to go.

Again, no honorifics when he's thinking to himself? Is he that close to Rei? (Could be...)

[sheankelor]

Chieko is not letting me put in her history in here... she is insisting on one for the new month. It was suposed to be comb, but that one was changed and shortened, so she is claming santified...

[raya_light]

Is it just me? Or are these OC's becoming pushier? *smile*

Everywhere she looked comma she was reminded of Kunzite.

[sheankelor]

Yep pushier.. *whispers* don't tell her... she has probably lost santified...*