008; Chaptered: Painful Bliss (Part Two of Three)

Dec 21, 2014 14:27

Foreword:It's delayed, but now it's here. I pulled an all-nighter last night, went out for a drink with friends, and now I feel drowsy and magical. This chapter is a bit 'meh', but we finally get a glimpse of Inoo's life! The next chapter will be the last and I'm having a hunch that it's going to be longer than this one, which is somewhat ( Read more... )

chaptered: painful bliss, fandom: hey say jump, p: takaki/inoo

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tasuku_kyota December 21 2014, 09:32:14 UTC
Spot for my bb takanoo first, gonna read tehee <3

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tasuku_kyota December 21 2014, 09:50:17 UTC
Yabu appeared and I couldn't be more happy!! ;A;
Thanks for this and somehow for the half-first of this chapter, I scared to Takaki ._.
He's my bias and imagined him being an M, I feel like 'nooo Yuuya please just no'
LOL sowreeh

And I'm sad, bcs next is the last :(
I enjoy this story, the development, the charas as well
But I wish the best ending for my cannon
Thanks and sorry blabbering much XD

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rawpickles December 21 2014, 12:52:08 UTC
;____; y-you make me all teary and flustered now waaaa

i was trying so hard to portray the great and amazing yuya being masochistic but hopefully i didn't do it that badly :/

aw ♡
there will more inoo fanfics in the future, i promise you! of course, as much as i like angst, i'm not intended to finish this one with a tragic or cliffhanging ending.

omg please blabber more if you want, i love it! and i am suuuuuper ecstatic that you actually took the time to even comment. heheh :)

so thank you very much for the comment!!

p.s: i read your inoo-centric fanfics and i found them super adorable. shhh will do a proper comment on your livejournal later.

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tasuku_kyota December 21 2014, 13:27:33 UTC
you did it greatly, literally!!
I can really imagine bb is smirking full of happiness and satisfaction like how he did on Bakaleya or maybe Gokusen

yepp i wait for your inoo fics then, especially takaino or yabuino ahaha I'm soooooo biased toward these otps. And don't worry about the time I spent for commenting, I just couldn't help myself from blabbering if I read my cannon, especially if the story is great, like this , y'know ahahaha XD

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ladydalatis December 21 2014, 14:24:06 UTC
Takaki is total M, that's new. I love this ♥ Not much Takanoo fic out there, so I'm so excited to read yours! And different genre too!

So sad next chap will be the last :/ But I can't wait for the ending~

Thank you for writing (seriously)

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rawpickles December 21 2014, 14:51:12 UTC
oh my god, thank you for taking the time to comment! i really appreciate it. and i can see that you're supposedly a legend in this fanfiction community. hmm hmm? /continues stalking

/smirky smirk

eheh, thank you! omg it took a literal dream for it to come true, takaki appeared in my dream all masochistic and shit and the minute i woke up ideas just rush like an adrenaline and here i am!

i hope i did takaki's personality justice, otherwise johnny would sue me for sure haha :)

ahhhh i talk too much sorry willbeshuttingupnow

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yuukinanaka10 December 21 2014, 16:47:26 UTC

Takaki being all M is love! I don't know why but seeing a new type of Takaki being M making me all excited... haha...

I can't wait to see the next chap~ excited, excited!

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rawpickles December 22 2014, 03:18:04 UTC
it's a good change or a bad change? hahahaha!

the next chapter has proved to be way longer, since i still have so many plotholes to be filled, minus the progression of their relationship. i don't know whether i'll be able to post it today, regardless of how much i want to :'(

thank you thank you for taking the time to comment! you always succeed in motivating me ♡

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