Comments | ravengrimm: Fic: Spn - What it's like to feel: Part 1/?

ravengrimm

Fic: Spn - What it's like to feel: Part 1/?

Mar 30, 2009 18:57

Title: What it's like to feel
Author: ( Read more... )

character: dean winchester, fanfiction, dean/castiel, slash, fic: spn, character: castiel

Comments 16

willow_fae_20 March 30 2009, 20:13:41 UTC

This was awesome. I love that you made a point of Castiel's power being barely restrained.

Hooray somebody liked it! ravengrimm March 31 2009, 13:44:57 UTC

Thank you so much. I was really worried it wasn't going to be any good, and nobody would read it. So thanks for being the first person to ever read one of my fanfics, yay!
xx

fledge March 31 2009, 18:05:40 UTC

DUDE, your first fanfic, seriously?! That's really good, I love how Castiel isn't at all sure how to go about things, or what Dean really wants, and seems willing to go along with it whatever. And the way you have Sam come and interrupt what could have been their first sex scene is just AWESOME *G* Blowing out all the street lights with just a kiss, huh? I think they'd better take the next stage into the middle of a forest or somewhere!

If you don't mind me pointing it out, the story could do with a teensy bit of editing, just a few typos and whatnot - nothing that spoils it, but you may as well buff it up for posterity. I'd be happy to help, if you'd like (yes I do have prior beta experience).

I really hope you will continue writing :)

ravengrimm March 31 2009, 18:40:17 UTC

Wow, thank you so much. I really didn’t think it was going to be any good. I'm trying out part 2. I’ve got the idea, just trying to get it down.
I'm really glad you liked it and I'd love some help sorting it out. I've literally only been on here for about 2 days and everything’s a bit confusing. It took several attempts just to get this one fic posted right. And I have no idea what 'prior beta' is; I'm such a novice.

fledge April 1 2009, 15:00:32 UTC

Yay that's good to hear - fandom always needs more good fic :D

Hee, sorry - 'beta' is the fandom term for edit/editor - it's a voluntary fan service, giving fics a once-over before posting for typos, any massive errors, etc. just so you can feel comfortable that you aren't posting any mistakes to a public forum. I've done it before and I know it's not easy to find a beta, especially when you're new to the fandom, so I thought I'd offer.

You can email me to discuss it, my addy is fledhyris AT gmail DOT COM (not putting it in the proper format because of spambots).

etoile444 April 1 2009, 00:32:40 UTC

OMG, they were so sweet together! So natural. God god, don't ya just wish they'd be canon in season 5? :)

ravengrimm April 1 2009, 09:56:11 UTC

Thank you for reading and enjoying it. I'm not sure what you mean by 'be canon' though.
:D

etoile444 April 2 2009, 21:46:06 UTC

I wrote canon for cannon! That is a hellacious faux pas! :P Oops! LOL

Edit: No, I DID spell canon correctly. You really ere asking. Canon is what happens on the actual show...you know. Kripke approved. Everything else is fanfic, AU etc....

ravengrimm April 4 2009, 13:12:44 UTC

Yep, me the novice, thanks for explaining.

whiteascocaine April 4 2009, 12:27:16 UTC

You hope I like? Baby I LOVE!

This story was great!!
Totally love the sparks flying (literally) during their heated moment. And what a heated moment it was *fans self*

Hope to read more from you! You're very good!!

ravengrimm April 4 2009, 13:10:23 UTC

Wow, thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.
And I'm working on part too right now.
Plenty more heat to come ;)

kierastarlight April 5 2009, 06:59:15 UTC

This was great!! Awesome first fic! So many good elements. Love it that Dean's worried about corrupting his angel : )

ravengrimm April 5 2009, 09:56:35 UTC

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. I'm glad you liked it.
Part 2 is in Dean's POV so a bit more worrying to come :)