Come Back to Me - Part 13

Aug 02, 2009 16:50


Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: PG-13 (for now)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

A/N: Hi guys. Sorry for the delayed update. Hope you enjoy it.

COME BACK TO ME - Part 13

The drive back to the house was a silent one though not uncomfortable. Pepa tapped unconsciously at the steering wheel, stealing ( Read more... )

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runetraverse August 2 2009, 07:08:20 UTC
Awwwwwwww!!! *goes all misty-eyed*

Okay, that was possibly the sweetest freaking thing EVER. Pepa's big surprise for Silvia is just icing on the fabulous cake that this story has been. And carrying Silvia across the threshold For The Absolute Win!

(I'd post more, but I'm happy sniffling atm, so I'm gonna go back and read it again. xD)

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raven_bard August 2 2009, 08:08:31 UTC
*hands you a tissue and a big cookie* Hey now, chin up. I didn't wanna make you tear up. *hugs*

I'm glad you enjoyed this last chapter. I was trying to write a solid ending and this was like my 7th or 8th draft. I was starting to go outta my mind. Almost changed this chapter but at the last minute I stopped myself. Thanks for reading and commenting on this story!

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lenageek August 2 2009, 07:23:38 UTC
OMG, I squeed in delight when I saw your post! That was just the sweetest thing ever, especially with Pepa taking her boots off to put the seashells in! What a perfect ending!

Thanks so much for doing this - when I watch the Pepsienglish channel (over and over again as I've been doing anyway) I'll stop at ep 103 and just keep watching happy PepSi videos and read this fanfic every time! Thanks for sharing your talent and writing with the PepSi community, it's much appreciated. Good luck with your studies!

(And yes, I'm still up late her in CA! It's the weekend and I'm trying to work on some PepSi icons! Hee!)

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raven_bard August 2 2009, 08:12:41 UTC
Lol. It's nice that my updates garner that kinda reaction from its readers. *blush*

And you're braver than me. I still haven't mustered up the strength to watch the earlier PepSi clips...still too raw I guess. I know that if I try to watch a clip I'll just get the cloud of doom and despair hanging over my head knowing what lies in their too near future. *shudders*

But thank you for following this story so diligently and taking the time to comment! I really appreciate it. And thank you about my studies. We'll see how it goes. If I find time I might do a sequel. I have a few ideas floating about.

Can't wait to see those PepSi icons but you should get some sleep! Isn't it awfully late over there?

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lenageek August 2 2009, 08:43:50 UTC
Hee hee! Yes, it's 1:39am and counting! :pp The only reason I'm braver than you to watch old clips is because I wanted to catch up. Believe it or not, ep 104 was the first full ep I'd watched on A3 - talk about a horrible way to start! But the acting was so good and so heartfelt, I wanted to know the background. It was only after reading your fic that I felt brave enough to go back to the beginning and see what PepSi greatness I missed! So thanks, I mean that.

I say you do their honeymoon next - plenty of room for smut there! Or throw in a bit of angst with Silvia visiting the graveyard.

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raven_bard August 2 2009, 08:56:02 UTC
*cringe* Ep 104 was the first full ep you saw?! Yikes! Totally not the best way to enter PepSidom but I agree with you that the acting was out of this world. In fact it was a little TOO realistic.

Well I'm glad this story helped to uncover the great world of PepSi. They are something that nobody should miss. *winks*

We'll see about the honeymoon and such. It's definitely an idea...and the graveyard bit I threw in on purpose for a potential sequel. *chuckles*

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mmm_kekse August 2 2009, 08:31:10 UTC
oh so many happy and slightly sad emotions running all through me right now! xD
such a beautiful ending! <3
but really I loved every tiny bit of your story. Every sentence, every word!
thank you!! <3
god I'm gonna miss seeing you're updates and go all yay inside xD
(you should totally write a honeymoon fic (if you find the time of course))
thank you again! so much!
<333

oh and good luck with your assignments and studies and everything!

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raven_bard August 2 2009, 08:58:13 UTC
Thank you back! It was possibly the hardest chapter to write. I swear I changed it so many times...I was ready to put my fist through the wall. So I'm glad to see my frustration paid off. *smiles*

I do have some ideas for a sequel but yeah life does get in the way huh? Thanks for wishing me good luck on my studies. Good luck on whatever you do too! :-)

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mmm_kekse August 2 2009, 09:26:58 UTC
definitely paid off! the chapter was perfect! so sweet and sad and happy and just made of awesome :D

and yes life can be quite distracting. but... it's overrated anyway, right? ... okay, no. ... but I really want and would absolutely love a sequel xD I'd go worship you if you write more <3 xD
and thanks!

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girlechick August 2 2009, 08:51:07 UTC
omg!! that was so sweet!
i like the bit where pepa carries silvia over the threshold!!
sad though to hear its the last installment!!

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raven_bard August 2 2009, 08:59:26 UTC
Thanks! And thank you for taking the time to read and comment. :-)

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raven_bard August 2 2009, 09:17:26 UTC
*digs toe into the ground* Yes, the end. Lo siento.

Thanks for the comments and praises. I really enjoy reading them. *smiles* I'm totally living in denial. With all those polls about the girls and the huge international campaign; I'm living on hope that they are gonna fix things.

As for that sequel..patience, hun. I can't finish all my work now. They give them to us in stages; oh they like to inform us in advance that we have this and this and that to do but they like to hand them out slowly. It's like a form of torture I swear.

Thanks for sticking around to read all the chapters! Greatly appreciate it. ;-)

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lenageek August 2 2009, 09:33:46 UTC
Yes, I finally sent in my pic to savepepsi@gmail.com and will write my emails/postcards, etc. I dunno if it will do any good, but it's nice to put my voice out there.

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