Romancing the Pain - Part 23

[raven_bard]

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: MA-15 (lots of violence and swearing)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: Howdy y’all! My muse called a truce. For now. So look! A new chapter so soon! *pats

Comments

[lenageek]

Oooohhh, you know how to twist the knife so welllll!!! Aaarrgghh! [Sorry, I'm yelling again!] So close, yet so far! I do like the Warrior Silvia tho - very kick ass!

You had my hand at my mouth when I read that Silvia got nicked, so you can imagine how worked up I was at the end of the chapter (and having my mom interrupt me just as I was reading it - I wanted to scream!) - ahh, you are the master of suspense! Just, please, don't let either of our girls go six feet under! Eep! I hear ya about the action bits - they are damn hard to write. But you do a better job than I do! ;D

[raven_bard]

*covers ears* Whoa, whoa, there tiger! *slowly uncovers one ear..hears silence and uncovers the other* Jesus, Mary and Elvis...it sounded like my own mama screaming at me for doing something wrong!

How awesome is Warrior Silvia? I really wished we saw her in badass mode more often in the show. Master of suspense huh? Sweet! I take that as one awesome compliment...I'm starting to get a kick outta these cliffies. *chuckles* And I can assure you nobody is buying the farm...nobody on the good side anyway. They might be banged up and bruised but they will triumph! *cue in victory music*

Thanks for reading and commenting. And your action scenes are just fine *winks*

[lenageek]

Whoops, sorry, I'm such a screamer! Tho what does that say about me? Heh heh..

I always liked seeing Silvia pulling a gun - something about hot women and guns or women in uniform - always gets my juices flowing! ;D Whew, thanks for the reassurance that none of the good guys are buying the farm - banged and bruised up I can deal with and you've sure given Pepa her share this time around!

Yeah, I'm working on my action sequence right this instance. The next chaper of mine's gonna be long and full of action - do you think folks will mind a long entry? [shrugs]

[raven_bard]

No please! Long entries rule!!! *bounces happily* Is it up? Will it be in 5 minutes? Please? Ooh I'm soo excited! *pops open a Jack and Coke bottle and reclines back in chair* I'm sooo ready....bring it on!

And yes...Silvia with a gun...Pepa with a gun...hell any woman with a gun. *shakes head* I need therapy. *grins*

[lenageek]

If you need therapy for women and guns, than so do I! Haha! Not that I want to be cured of any disorder for drooling after hot women with firearms!

You and your Jack and Cokes! I'm preferable to vodka/cranberry or a fuzzy navel myself - typical chick drinks! But give me enough and I'll be talking your head off and laughing away!

Ooh, maybe I spoke too soon! This chapter's got about five different parts and I'm working on the last two - I'll post as quickly as I can but unfortunately not as quick as in five minutes!

[raven_bard]

True. Who would want to be be cured of drooling after women and guns? Go ahead and declare me insane! *laughs*

And hey Jack and Coke is simply beauuuutiful. I never was much for the girly cocktails...it's probably cuz in my household we only drink the hard stuff...usually with a side of nothing. *chuckles* The best part? The gals outdo the men at the drinking table. We're the ones usually dragging their sorry asses outta the bars. *smirks* And my dad's the one with Irish blood..ha!

Well I don't wanna hurry you...too much. I'm just glad you're gonna be updating soon! *grins*