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Romancing the Pain - Part 18

Sep 19, 2009 19:29

Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: MA-15 (for violence)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: Next chapter’s up for those still interested. Sorry if it’s a little untidy, I’m having a busy ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

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junebuggy01 September 19 2009, 14:49:55 UTC

*Tackles you to the ground and straddles you, grabbing the rope you have and ties your hands together. Placing them above you head.* F&$% me, you're a quick one Honey! That took forever for me to catch you. *Rakes fingernails up your torso slowly.*

Oh yeah, you're chapter! It was brilliant! I hate you for the torturing thing, but I gotta say this line, “It’s so very rewarding to see that my going to all that trouble of mixing that salt water had not gone to waste.” made me laugh like an idiot... I dunno why.

But you're gonna have Pepa escape right? And then run into her pelirroja, yeah? And then said pelirroja is gonna go apeshit(1 or 2 words? IDK) on them all ala Rambo style right? Except for El Gordo and that huge torture punching dude. They'll cut their fingers off right? And toes....and of course penises. This comment is getting long.

angie005 September 19 2009, 15:37:52 UTC

DIOS!!! JuneBuggy!! Leave the smut to the fanfics NOT the comment sections!!! Dear lord, gotta change my pants now!! *wink

Raven... You had me screaming my ass off at my computer!! WHY WHY WHY!?? I feel like I'm reading the new season of LHDP cause it's suppose to be dark and no romance!! I can't take it anymore!!

*Runs to a cheesy romance novel and hides underneath a blanket with a flash light

junebuggy01 September 19 2009, 17:35:33 UTC

Sorry Angiekins bout the pants. But she *Points at Raven.* let my muse go free! And then ran away from me for like a day and a half! I still can't find my muse. Even with Xe's Deeohgee

raven_bard September 20 2009, 00:32:37 UTC

*wince* Sorry. It'll all be over soon.

raven_bard September 20 2009, 00:31:39 UTC

Hey lemme up. *pouts* I have homework. I can't play with you. Go play with Xe. And your muse said she'll be back in a few days. You worked her to the bone, she needed a break.

Yeah, yeah. Big bad mafia guys will go into the Silvia blender to be demolished...slowly. I just gotta figure out how to get Pepa to escape. Thanks for reading, juney. :-)

junebuggy01 September 20 2009, 07:09:33 UTC

Aw, you're no fun *Unstraddles you*... And I think Xe's busy. *Sighs* I'm gonna have to play with myself... Um... take that whatever way you'd like.

And YAY!

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