Romancing the Pain - Part 15

Sep 09, 2009 14:43


Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: I kinda hit writer’s block halfway writing this but being forced to analyze The King and I (1956), musical for an ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

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xejanfan September 9 2009, 05:20:31 UTC
oh shit oh shit oh shit! ack! *clutches chest* ok, that was the last little bit of my hard being frozen in liquid nitrogen and being dropped from the empire state building into a flaming box of broken glass and lemon juice ( ... )

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xejanfan September 9 2009, 05:26:17 UTC
OH! and how much do i LOVE the king and i?!? the answer would be a lot. deborah kerr.... rawr! yul brynner.... the effing MAN!! (jodie foster, i love you, but oh please... and chow, dude, stick to martial arts epics, mmmkay?) okay, goes back to sniffling...

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raven_bard September 9 2009, 05:39:32 UTC
Jeez woman, double posting! *shakes head in exasperation.* Lol, no, I'm joking ( ... )

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xejanfan September 9 2009, 05:52:52 UTC
well i've already had a very thorough massage, i'm taking ibuprofen, got a heating pad, and i skipped kickboxing today... isn't that something? and it's not TOTALLY pulled, more like just really tender and knotted up... and if i have a choice between strangling and hugging, may i please have a hug? mebbe more than brief? i mean, i'm trying to be good, and i was the first to comment, and i didn't even fall asleep while reading this time? and my sniffles are actually due to a wicked bout of allergies... which i've taken meds for but it hasn't helped... (i swallowed pills cuz i'm a big girl) *cheeky grin* *ducks flying chakram and breeches* *reaches up to snag breeches out of the air*

love you wifey! you're the bestest bestest ever! *runs, well, kinda hunchback of notre dame runs away*

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sheeky September 9 2009, 06:24:21 UTC
brilliant! I can't wait to read more - I'm such a fan!

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raven_bard September 9 2009, 07:57:39 UTC
*shy smile* A fan? I'm honored.

Thanks for reading and commenting. More soon, I promise. In a few days. *grins*

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mmm_kekse September 9 2009, 06:51:51 UTC
.... and you're sure you know what your brain is doing? I mean... this will end happy, yes? not just... happy-ish... with Pepa losing body parts and great amounts of skin so that she's in constant pain and Silvia has to roll her around in a wheelchair for the rest of their lives? *shudders*
but aww Pepa just thinking about Silvia's safety. would have pained my heart so bad if it didn't die on me when I read that message. thought it would be some demands or something not just a note saying "hey you, imagine what we're gonna do to her!". okay I guess that makes more sense than weird demands but.... oh gods!!! no more Tarantino movies for you!
and I wanted to write more and repeat how much I love this story and reply to your other comment (I'd love to have that album but you totally don't have to do that if it's too much work or anything!) but I gotta go now or I'll be late. sorry.
and you go write the next chapter now 'cause the end was totally a cliffhanger! :( lol

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raven_bard September 9 2009, 07:56:43 UTC
*hands you a slice of mud cake* I promise a happy end...fingers crossed. *nervous grin* I mean...Pepa's a strong cookie...it'll take more than a few rounds with bad ass mafia men to make her crumble. But ooh, losing body parts and skin! *thinks and jots down some notes* Thank you fellow QT watcher...*snickers*

And I'll upload that album and give you the link soon...it's no problem at all. Thanks for reading and commenting, hope you're not late to wherever you're dashing off to.

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mmm_kekse September 9 2009, 17:42:16 UTC
no no no no! not funny! *reaches for the notes* go watch Care Bears for ideas! just... let the mafia tickle her or something! yeah write that down! give me those notes! forget I said anything :( no 'stuck in the middle with you'-ear cutting scene or... or.... I do something mean! LOL

and thank you! :D *hugs you and then jumps up and down in anticipation*
and you don't have to thank me for reading and commenting. your fic is so fantastic I couldn't stop even if I wanted to xD and commenting is just necessary 'cause there's no other way to cope with all the awesomely evil things you're doing to them and us *chuckles*

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raven_bard September 10 2009, 07:11:01 UTC
*tucks notes into a secret compartment* What notes? Ooh ear cutting! *makes mental note...evil laugh* Anyway....what would be the fun of having Pepa being tickled to death? *blinks* Did I say death? No death...I meant what's the fun in Pepa being tickled? That's not a form of torture...*nervous giggle*

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booglebee September 9 2009, 08:02:02 UTC
On my train home from uni today I decided to look a the PepSi forum on my cellphone and wow you'd posted so I read your whole update on the train. Loved it loved it loved it!
But it made me soooo sad!
And OUCH!
"As the first punch descended onto her stomach, Pepa’s only thought through the sudden haze of pain, was of her wife."
Geez, hurt our fangirl hearts. But I still love you! And your imagination.

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raven_bard September 9 2009, 08:07:18 UTC
You read this whole thing on an itty bitty cell phone screen?!! On a MOVING train?! *pales* Oh there's a recipe for transport sickness...

But I'm still awful glad you're reading and loving it. *grins* Yeah...ouch probably best describes this new update.

Sorry for bruising your hearts but I think the only way Pepa's gonna maintain her sanity is by thinking of her pelirroja. I think...I hope...I mean I know! *nervous laugh*

And I love you too! *hugs you and hands you a slice of mud cake* I just came back from the grocer's. Fresh from the bakery. Enjoy!

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booglebee September 9 2009, 08:11:37 UTC
Yup I sure did! Well you'd updated and I couldn't just not read it and wait half an hour to get home. I'm not that patient!
Since I recently discovered I can go on LJ on my cellphone it's been a bit distracting I must say.

You better know! Or we are doomed...or not. I trust you!
Oo mud cake? for me?! Thanks! *hugs back*

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vickiheartpepsi September 9 2009, 08:27:10 UTC
................i cant breathe....
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omg....i hate how pepa's gettin hurt and silvia is lyk...in shock
but otheriwse i really lyk ur writing and ur complications and evrythin and i'm sure all this PepSi pain will pay off to a really really really good ending right?....right??:P
thanks for the update!

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raven_bard September 9 2009, 11:34:08 UTC
*hands you a small brown paper bag* Breathe into that...steady controlled breaths. Don't pass out on me, k?

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying the story even though it's gone all bump in the night with Pepa being kidnapped and all. And yes, there will be a happy ending...no smut but yes, happy. Happy-ish. *sheepish grin*

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