Comments | raven29121982: Brand New Game

raven29121982

Brand New Game

Mar 22, 2009 01:31

So, more fic basically. This is a stand-alone, but there is a very good chance there might be more of this verse cause there certainly is a lot more of it in my head. Also, my LJ editor hates punctuation, apparently. I'm trying to get it to talk to me, really I do.

Title: Brand New Game
Author: Raven
Rating: as yet PG-13
Pairings: Shane/Brendon Spencer ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

fruityahren March 22 2009, 01:00:17 UTC

Well, I don't read panic, so the characters themselves are lost on me.

However, I LOVED this;

Jon’s ever present grin turns into full blown laughter. “Subtle,” he chokes and there are actual tears in his eyes. “Ryan wouldn’t know subtle if it was subtle’s tongue up his ass instead of yours.” He pauses for a moment and shakes his head. “Ugh. No offense, man. But. Gross!” Spencer kinda gets it. He wouldn’t want images of Jon...and that’s why the thought stops right there, thank you. Cause he actually has some semblance of self-control.

It made me lol. Seriously, my housemate looked at me funnily.

I love the subtle D/s references and actions, and I personally would be excited to see more of this fic!

I'm glad I woke up this morning. lol

raven29121982 March 22 2009, 01:18:44 UTC

Aw, thanks. Especially since I'm guessing Panic is usually one of the few things to squick you with.

It's a relatively new one for me too, but I just can not resist the person Spencer Smith has become in my brain and they are just the level of awkward that has me banging my head against the wall. (I could include ridiculous amounts of pic spam right here, but seriously... no. I can't even justify that to myself.)

Still, I feel like a bit of Cat has wormed its way into my brain (in the shape of Cat/wiL Francis. I might throw in Brian Molko for a bit of comic relief, not sure about that yet.

fruityahren March 22 2009, 01:58:31 UTC

I've probably listened to three panic songs my whole life. i've nothing against them, but they generally don't interest me, I'm more of a hardcore/metal girl. Good fic, on the other hand, does interest me, and I'll read pretty much anything as long as i trust the author.

*cough* Cat/wIL Francis would be pretty awesome. It would be very pretty. So pretty my eyes would bleed. And I can see preening and pretentiousness. PLEASE WRITE CAT/wIL!

slashxmistress March 24 2009, 23:24:53 UTC

Oh man this is beautiful!!
But what a tease!! You have to write more now, you know that right??! :D

raven29121982 March 25 2009, 00:26:29 UTC

I was on that as you posted the comment. :)
And we're definitely heading into the proper stuff, too. So yeah, coming to a journal near you very soon. And thanks!

northernveil March 26 2009, 09:10:52 UTC

Great fic! I'm really looking forward to more!

raven29121982 March 26 2009, 11:15:47 UTC

Thanks so much, it's here.

Also, I just got lost in your journal for ages. :)

mrsquizzical April 5 2009, 01:45:36 UTC

hiya. i really enjoyed that! lovely story.

raven29121982 April 5 2009, 09:42:52 UTC

Why thank you! :)

analogized April 21 2009, 04:46:41 UTC

“So my guess would be Shane was asking you politely to reign your bitch in before he does it for you.”

Dude! *flails* I love that line. This one makes me happy. Shane just wants Ryan to be nice! And Spencer thinks the whole convoluted thing could work! Never fails to make me smile. :) Lovely, as always.