Break my little shipper heart into a million pieces, why don't you?!natural_blue_26May 29 2011, 03:17:31 UTC
- Dear Lord chica, that Simon/Reevers one is creepy as hell! *shivers* And that's totally Kaylee with him, I refuse to believe otherwise. ;)
- 1) is this how the world ends is an awesome prompt and 2) < Your world, > the Yeerk says, equally calm. < There are others. >
< Not to me. >
< No, > the Yeerk agrees thoughtfully. < I don't suppose there would be. > is so, so well done. So over it!Yeerk clearly does not give a rat's ass.
- "And," Severus added, "if you ever speak a word of this to anyone I will personally oversee your living disembowelment and pickle your organs to restart the collection that was regrettably destroyed earlier this evening. Do you understand?" The dialog in this one and insight into Snape's head is great- I wish something akin to this could have happened in cannon!
- He starts the water, as hot as it'll go, and as he waits for the tub to fill he watches steam collect on the mirror, traces in it with a finger like he used to do as a child. When he steps back he realizes he's written a good-bye. Oh, oh, OH. This awful. Beautiful, but awful, and a terribly grown up ending to a children's series that already danced a very red, thin line. Bravo.
- "I don't recognize you," she said, her head tipped to one side. "Anger clouds your features, Simon."
He kept his expression purposefully vague, used to River's insights. "Okay."
"I'll come back when I can see you." And just like that, she was gone.
He stepped across the room and closed the door behind her. Sitting down on the bed, he buried his face in his hands and cried.
Ok, I really, really want to much fic from the inside of Simon's head from you now. *jaw drop*
- When Tobias emerges from the Pool, the first thing he notices is the sunshine. It occurs to him that it was dark when he went down, and shouldn't he be worried about that? But after the hours spent trapped underground, with the hawk brain panicking about the lack of flying space and his own mind fluttering with all the possibilities of what could happen to him if he can't get out (killed, infested, forced to betray the others), he thinks he's probably lost all capability for rational thought. I seriously almost quoted all of this back at you. So very, very Tobias.
- Maybe what she really needed was someone to need her. She didn't want a big, strong man to protect her. She'd never wanted that. But somewhere in the chaos of war she found that holding Tobias down when he flew too high and forgot himself, maybe that was what she needed too. To glue herself together she had to reassemble someone else's pieces first, instead of tearing them apart with claws and fangs and blood. Every single line of this hits me right in the heart. So completely TR I don't even--- ♥ ♥ ♥
- 1) is this how the world ends is an awesome prompt and 2) < Your world, > the Yeerk says, equally calm. < There are others. >
< Not to me. >
< No, > the Yeerk agrees thoughtfully. < I don't suppose there would be. > is so, so well done. So over it!Yeerk clearly does not give a rat's ass.
- "And," Severus added, "if you ever speak a word of this to anyone I will personally oversee your living disembowelment and pickle your organs to restart the collection that was regrettably destroyed earlier this evening. Do you understand?" The dialog in this one and insight into Snape's head is great- I wish something akin to this could have happened in cannon!
- He starts the water, as hot as it'll go, and as he waits for the tub to fill he watches steam collect on the mirror, traces in it with a finger like he used to do as a child. When he steps back he realizes he's written a good-bye. Oh, oh, OH. This awful. Beautiful, but awful, and a terribly grown up ending to a children's series that already danced a very red, thin line. Bravo.
- "I don't recognize you," she said, her head tipped to one side. "Anger clouds your features, Simon."
He kept his expression purposefully vague, used to River's insights. "Okay."
"I'll come back when I can see you." And just like that, she was gone.
He stepped across the room and closed the door behind her. Sitting down on the bed, he buried his face in his hands and cried.
Ok, I really, really want to much fic from the inside of Simon's head from you now. *jaw drop*
- When Tobias emerges from the Pool, the first thing he notices is the sunshine. It occurs to him that it was dark when he went down, and shouldn't he be worried about that? But after the hours spent trapped underground, with the hawk brain panicking about the lack of flying space and his own mind fluttering with all the possibilities of what could happen to him if he can't get out (killed, infested, forced to betray the others), he thinks he's probably lost all capability for rational thought. I seriously almost quoted all of this back at you. So very, very Tobias.
- Maybe what she really needed was someone to need her. She didn't want a big, strong man to protect her. She'd never wanted that. But somewhere in the chaos of war she found that holding Tobias down when he flew too high and forgot himself, maybe that was what she needed too. To glue herself together she had to reassemble someone else's pieces first, instead of tearing them apart with claws and fangs and blood. Every single line of this hits me right in the heart. So completely TR I don't even--- ♥ ♥ ♥
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