So I Took a Bus and Walked

Aug 06, 2010 19:41

Title: So I Took a Bus and Walked
Author: ratherastory, for the castielfest fic exchange.
Recipient: Pinch-hit fic for ibroketuesday
Characters: Castiel, a bunch of OCs
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2,163
Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers for 5.18 through 5.22, general spoilers for the show through Season 5.
Notes/Prompt: “Castiel's experiences in those weeks he spent as a human. We didn't see ( Read more... )

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yasminke August 6 2010, 23:50:13 UTC
Another nice one.

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ratherastory August 6 2010, 23:57:17 UTC
*beams*

Thank you!

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saberivojo August 7 2010, 00:27:25 UTC
Ohhh. Lovely.

He uses three-quarters of the money to purchase a ticket on a bus named after a breed of racing dog... I snorted out loud on that one.

I love Castiel's innocence through out this. That is so like him, but little bits, like his attempt to quantify Dean's remarks and his level of hurt, those are things we really aren't privy to so reading them here is perfect.

I loved then ending too. It made me smile.

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ratherastory August 7 2010, 12:05:11 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm very pleased you liked it. I was rather fond of the "racing dog" line myself. :D

I quite like exploring Castiel's inner monologue.

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greeneyes_fan August 7 2010, 00:39:52 UTC
Yes. His innocence, that touches the good folk around him even though they have no idea what they're sensing. Very much reminded me of one of the more memorable Greyhound rides of my lifetime.

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ratherastory August 7 2010, 12:06:34 UTC
I'm so glad this rang true. Thank you!

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ratherastory August 7 2010, 13:57:46 UTC
Thanks!

I had a LOT of fun imagining Dean's exasperated look upon discovering an abundance of pink and rhinestones, and possibly some smart-alec remarks about getting Sam a matching outfit. ;)

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claudiapriscus August 7 2010, 02:59:37 UTC
oh, you. You've left me with tears pricking my eyes. It was the blessing at the end that got me most.

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ratherastory August 7 2010, 13:58:20 UTC
Aww! *hugs*

I'm glad you liked it. I was rather pleased with the blessing, myself. :)

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