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We Will Not Regret The Past, Nor Wish To Shut The Door On It

Mar 17, 2010 21:53

Title: We Will Not Regret The Past, Nor Wish To Shut The Door On It
Summary: In spite of her better judgment, Lindsey goes to set the record straight with Sam after the events of "Free To Be You and Me."
Spoilers: Up to the end of 5.04 "The End."
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Lindsay, brief appearance by Dean (sort of)
Rating: NC-17, God help me
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fanfic, supernatural, 5.03, we will not regret the past, episode coda

Comments 30

borgmama1of5 March 18 2010, 02:16:50 UTC

I liked the way you wrote Lindsey. And of course poor Sam.

ratherastory March 18 2010, 02:19:02 UTC

Thanks! :)

I really liked Lindsey, even if she got so little screen time. I'm all in favour of strong-minded, independent women. :)

wave_obscura March 18 2010, 02:48:39 UTC

Well, I'm glad I decided to take a chance on the het! I enjoyed this a lot-- poor sick Sammy, and the muttering for Dean. I love it. I must admit Lindsay got on my nerves on Show, but I liked her here. Great job, thank you!

ratherastory March 18 2010, 03:19:46 UTC

Fandom is RUINING me forever! I can't believe I wrote sex. *headdesk*

I'm glad you liked it! I did stick in a whole bunch of h/c to console myself and make it up to my readers. :)

pkwench March 18 2010, 03:18:02 UTC

I love this. I love it because it's heaps and yards more than smut. Sam. Oh, Puppy. You have a gift for making me want to just hug the holy crap out of these boys. It was really nice to see someone taking care of him and it broke my heart in eight or nine little places the way that Dean kept falling from his lips. Two more points: the sex was perfectly done. Steamy as hell without being too graphic. Awesome use of hands because, damn, hands are good. Final point: I love Lindsey here. I love how you took a two-line back story from the show and flushed it out so that it had life. And she's just so caring and then so badass, so awesome at the end. You absolutely rock with breathing life into secondary characters.

ratherastory March 18 2010, 04:07:42 UTC

:D

God, this fandom is RUINING me. I'm glad the sex worked for you, though. Egads, I still can't believe I wrote that.

I thought Lindsey was tragically undeveloped as a character. I felt that she could be so much more badass than she was, and the last time we see her she's chained to the bar, looking all frightened. I wanted her to get a bit of her own back. :)

primrose_1 March 18 2010, 03:50:51 UTC

I loved the end of this! I loved Lindsey facing down the hunters. Hee. I'll admit, I simply skimmed the sex scene, but I really liked the story. I liked how Lindsey is soft and sweet but still has this strong core to her. She's not willing to give up, and she calls things like she sees them. It was lovely!

ratherastory March 18 2010, 04:13:59 UTC

Skimming is fine. :D

I skim sex scenes too, when it's not what I want to read. Besides, less embarrassment for me this way! ;)

I really liked Lindsey, and was sort of pissed that Show left her looking terrified and handcuffed to the bar. :P

elliemurasaki March 18 2010, 04:12:09 UTC

Lindsey is all kinds of awesome and we need her back.

ratherastory March 18 2010, 04:14:35 UTC

I agree completely!

I'm a little sad Show didn't give her a bit more screen time. She was neat. :)