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A Pre-Existing Condition

Sep 20, 2011 20:31

Title: A Pre-Existing Condition
Summary: From a prompt by desertport at the hawaii_50_hc h/c comment-fic meme. Steve and Danny are imprisoned for some reason or other and held in two rooms separated by an opaque wall that lets a little sound through. One or the other is injured, and/or maybe being interrogated by the bad guys, and all the other one can do is listen and ( Read more... )

fanfic, danno *hearts* steve, h50, comment-fic is eating my brain, danno, bad timing verse, steve

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zortified September 21 2011, 01:06:03 UTC

I am making high pitched noises that only dolphins on another planet can hear.

\o/

*smishes story so HARD*

ratherastory September 21 2011, 12:07:42 UTC

LOL

Alien dolphins, eh?

Glad you liked it!

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ratherastory September 21 2011, 12:21:19 UTC

*beams*

Thank you so much!

lunasky3 September 21 2011, 02:04:04 UTC

*wibbles*

OH that hit crazy close to home. Poor Danny. One seizure is made of super suckage, and multiples are 10000x worse D:

ratherastory September 21 2011, 12:50:01 UTC

Poor Danno, I'm very mean to him. Am I to take it you have personal experience with this? If so, my sympathies, seriously.

lunasky3 September 21 2011, 14:48:51 UTC

I've got a mild seizure disorder, aka epilepsy sometimes owns my ass. It's not fun when it's not managed.

ratherastory September 21 2011, 15:14:13 UTC

Oh, man, that seriously sucks. I know how awful it can be when you're still trying to figure out dosages and stuff (not from personal experience, though).

harrigan September 21 2011, 02:11:59 UTC

Fun read... and fun re-read, since I'll bookmark to wallow in again! (That 'in the next room' is kind of a kink of mine. Like watching videotape after the fact, or following a blood trail... that heart-in-your-throat feeling of helplessness because you aren't right *there*!

ratherastory September 21 2011, 12:54:01 UTC

Thank you very much! Yeah, the room-next-door thing is a great trope to play with. Glad you liked it!

tifaching September 21 2011, 03:09:18 UTC

Thank you for writing H50 fic. I probably would never have started watching otherwise, and what I'd have missed!

This was amazing. The "I'm going to hurt your partner/friend/brother until you talk" just floats my boat.

And this: Steve shakes his head, then reaches over and cups the back of Danny's neck, disguising it as a soft cuff to the back of the head, but he lets his hand linger." So much yes.

ratherastory September 21 2011, 12:55:22 UTC

♥

I'm so glad you're joining me in my new fandom love! Steve and Danny totally belong together forever, and I will whump them until they see the light! ;)