One Saved Message

May 14, 2011 21:20

Title: One Saved Message
Summary: After a hunting accident puts Sam out of commission for a couple of days, Dean decides to surprise his brother with a new phone, since his old one is toast. Even better is when he finds that he’s been able to save all of Sam’s old information and restore it to his cell. That’s when he discovers an old voicemail ( Read more... )

fanfic, supernatural, help japan, dean-o, charity, one saved message, sammy

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borgmama1of5 May 15 2011, 01:39:29 UTC
Sam's distress, and Dean's reaction to it, brought tears to my eyes.

I have a problem with the idea that soullessSam bothered to keep that message, but this is so effectively written and gives such a terrific emo moment that I'm not going to quibble. :)

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ratherastory May 15 2011, 02:00:32 UTC
I did think about soulless Sam a lot when I wrote this, trying to wrap my head around whether he would keep it. In the end, it made sense that he would, but not for the same reasons as regular old Sam did. I think that soulless Sam recognized that the message was important to his old self, and that it created a kind of bond with Dean. He said it himself, that things were better with Dean around, even if he couldn't feel the same affection and love that he used to. It would also have been a clue of sorts, yet another Thing About Sam And Dean that he could study and use to make sense of a world that kind of got turned around on him when he wasn't looking.

In short, I'm not sure exactly what his reasons were in all, but it kind of made sense to me in a weird way. :)

I'm glad you liked the rest of it!

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quickreaver May 16 2011, 03:15:30 UTC
Huh. Didn't think about what Soulless Sam woulda done with the message, but I'll buy your reasoning for a nickel. I'm an eldest child myself; I think you caught Dean's vibe, spot on. And Sam? Adorable in his misery. Lovely, sweet little vignette. Enjoyed the heck outta it. :D

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ratherastory May 16 2011, 09:05:32 UTC
Yeah, I was writing along merrily and suddenly thought: "Crap. Why on earth would Robo!Sam keep this when he has no feelings?" And then I remembered that he *did* have feelings, just no empathy or sympathy or compassion. So then figuring out what would motivate him to keep it became a lot easier.

I'm very glad you enjoyed the story! :)

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embroiderama May 15 2011, 01:52:11 UTC
Oh, Sammy Sam. I love this a lot!

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ratherastory May 15 2011, 02:00:43 UTC
Thank you!

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cordelia_gray May 15 2011, 02:12:28 UTC
*sniffle*

I, um, seem to have something in my eye.

Everyone else just comes and goes, and in the end it's just them... Ain't that the truth.

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ratherastory May 15 2011, 02:19:48 UTC
The epic love story of Sam 'n' Dean continues uninterrupted. :)

I'm glad you liked it!

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geminigrl11 May 15 2011, 02:28:00 UTC
More than a fist pump for this...more like a mighty yawp! Damn, this fic needs to be canon! NEEDS TO BE. *a-flail*

SAAAAAAAAAAM! (and Dean, too).

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ratherastory May 15 2011, 02:42:02 UTC
Aw, thank you! Poor boys, there are so many forces trying to sabotage them that they don't even know about...

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harrigan May 15 2011, 03:37:48 UTC
This is one of those gems where I really want to tell you in detail why this is so incredibly awesome, but I can barely type when I get weepy like this. Sorry. (But it is all your fault, when you think about it.)

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ratherastory May 15 2011, 03:49:02 UTC
Aww, thank you! *hands you a kleenex*

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