Beta request #6,894,237
Hi all!
So I am supposed to be posting my l4d_bigbang on Monday, and am finishing up the massive clean-up of my draft now. The draft should be ready by tomorrow evening.
Is anyone out there willing to take a look at it for the usual SPaG and "Oh my God, ratherastory, what the hell is that sentence?" kind of stuff?
It's going to clock in at a little under 15K by my count. It's currently just under 13K and I have a big scene left to write, hopefully tonight.
Because of the quick turnaround, I'm not asking for an in-depth beta, just one to make sure there's nothing that will make me have to leave fandom because it's so bad. ;)
For any of you who don't know, Left 4 Dead is a video game about survivors trying to make it through zombie-infested territory. So, essentially, that's what this story is about: Sam and Dean and a couple of other survivors going from Point A to Point B and trying not to get nommed by zombies. The usual levels of gore that you'll find in my horror writing are there, and are in fact really not as bad as some of my stories.
Anyone? Bueller?
So I am supposed to be posting my l4d_bigbang on Monday, and am finishing up the massive clean-up of my draft now. The draft should be ready by tomorrow evening.
Is anyone out there willing to take a look at it for the usual SPaG and "Oh my God, ratherastory, what the hell is that sentence?" kind of stuff?
It's going to clock in at a little under 15K by my count. It's currently just under 13K and I have a big scene left to write, hopefully tonight.
Because of the quick turnaround, I'm not asking for an in-depth beta, just one to make sure there's nothing that will make me have to leave fandom because it's so bad. ;)
For any of you who don't know, Left 4 Dead is a video game about survivors trying to make it through zombie-infested territory. So, essentially, that's what this story is about: Sam and Dean and a couple of other survivors going from Point A to Point B and trying not to get nommed by zombies. The usual levels of gore that you'll find in my horror writing are there, and are in fact really not as bad as some of my stories.
Anyone? Bueller?