The Most Powerful Voice (The Improving the Silence Remix)

Nov 10, 2010 04:07

Title: The Most Powerful Voice (The Improving the Silence Remix)
Prompt: Written for the hoodie_time Dean-focused h/c remix challenge.
A remix of jennytork's Silent Suffering, in which Dean goes mute after ‘In My Time of Dying’ as a belated reaction to trauma.
Summary: Sometimes there are no words.
Characters: Sam, Dean, Bobby (briefly)
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2,491
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fanfic, fic challenge, dean-o, the most powerful voice, bobby is awesome, sammy

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becc_j November 10 2010, 10:36:40 UTC
wow, i really loved this. another story set in the early seasons, argh, it's too good! There's so very 'Winchester' here and they're very human; Sam with his insecurity and Dean with his pain (that doesn't translate into punching Sam but into silence instead, i like that). It makes them so much more relatable. Love it.

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ratherastory November 10 2010, 18:57:03 UTC
Thanks! I am wallowing in the early seasons lately, can you tell? ;)

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fifimom November 10 2010, 11:01:33 UTC
Really good. Thanks so much for sharing.

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ratherastory November 10 2010, 18:58:07 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

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embroiderama November 10 2010, 11:23:35 UTC
Oh, ouch, I love this! I love the tension of Dean being sick and silent and Sam just trying to hold things together.

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ratherastory November 10 2010, 19:01:11 UTC
Thank you! :)

I am a big fan of stories set post-"In My Time of Dying," watching Sam 'n' Dean trying to put themselves back together.

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emmram November 10 2010, 12:26:25 UTC
Y'know, all the warnings about the angst almost turned me away from the fic, but I'm glad I read it anyway. It's got the quiet, sad vibe to it that I love, and after reading n-number of over-the-top post-IMTOD fics, this is pretty much a blessing. Dean, quiet and grieving. Sam, doing his best to keep them both going. If not for Dean, there would be no reason to talk. hit me so hard for some reason.

You make my heart ache for both brothers here.

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ratherastory November 10 2010, 19:02:53 UTC
I'm glad you decided to read anyway! I try not to do over-the-top angst, but the story did turn out pretty angst-ridden anyway.

I'm pleased you liked it! And yeah, poor boys. They've never had an easy time of it.

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primrose_1 November 10 2010, 12:50:29 UTC
This is where I'm more like Sam. When things are down, I am a talker. But I love Dean's silence too, and can understand it. I love how you've managed the unspoken communication. Of course Sam would be able to understand Dean- words or not.

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ratherastory November 10 2010, 19:04:47 UTC
I can understand Dean's silence too, although I've found that if I keep quiet and let things simmer it never ends well.

Poor boys. At least in Season 2 they still had each other.

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