Take Me Home -Part 6

Jan 18, 2010 09:42

Title: Take Me Home
Summary: The Trickster decides to have some fun with Sam. Wackiness ensues, with a healthy helping of whump, because it's me and I can't leave the boys intact.
Spoilers: All aired episodes up to 5.10
Word Count: 1,843 for this chapter
Disclaimer: Luckily for them, I own nothing. Otherwise they'd be in for a world of hurt.
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izzie7 January 18 2010, 15:01:50 UTC
Great! I rather like Sam like this - think how useful a demon-hunting dog would be!

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ratherastory January 18 2010, 15:05:02 UTC
Indeed! That's the question, isn't it? Sam-the-human is pretty good at spotting demons now, so it's not necessarily that Sam-the-dog has any special abilities.

Dogs have a much keener sense of smell than humans anyway, so at the very least he can smell the sulfur coming off Alo, and that would tip him off that she's not a normal human.

Alo is a pretty low-level demon, is my current theory. I don't think Sam could take on a really powerful one in his current state, but I could be mistaken.

Thanks for weighing in!

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tifaching January 18 2010, 15:15:53 UTC
Yay for Sammy the demon hunting dog! I just loved the images of Sam and Dean playing fetch. There really is nothing more smile inducing than a dog that's having a great time! And poor Dean. Not even able to play with his dog in the park without being attacked. Good thing Sam had those fangs! Great update.

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ratherastory January 18 2010, 15:21:14 UTC
:)

I loved playing fetch with my dog. You're right: there's nothing more guaranteed to provoke a smile than a dog frolicking and having a great old time.

I couldn't leave the Winchesters alone for that long. I mean, really, what are the odds that they could get through a single day without running into trouble? ;)

Belgian shepherds can be freaking scary. They're big, they look a bit like wolves (to people who don't know much about dogs) and they have very big, very sharp teeth.

Thanks for commenting so faithfully! You make my day. :)

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tifaching January 18 2010, 15:50:18 UTC
Heh. Stalking you, remember? I can't wait to read anything new you do! And, though I'd be commenting anyway, I'm thinking of asking you the huge favor of betaing a fic I'm writing. I've never used a beta before, but the community I'm writing the fic for requires it. I checked out spn betas, but I see lots of betaing requests there and very few have been replied to. And I'd rather have someone I know likes my stories, critiquing and fixing one for me. It's about half done now and at the risk of sounding terrible, I don't think it's going to need a lot of work. So, no pressure, if you can't do it that's cool, I just thought I'd ask.

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ratherastory January 18 2010, 15:55:47 UTC
Sure, no problem! I just need to know how long it is (approximate wordcount) and what your turnaround time needs to be, so that I can be sure I can get it to you in time. I hate to tell people I'll do something and then not be able to deliver because of time constraints.

Also, I work on a Mac, so it has to be in a txt or rtf file so I can actually read it. :)

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followingabdiel January 18 2010, 15:31:22 UTC
Another awesome chapter! Poor Dean, getting run ragged by doggySam--LOL! You do a great job with description--I could totally visualize all of this happening in my head. Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter!!

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ratherastory January 18 2010, 15:36:36 UTC
Heh. My father used to take our Belgian Shepherd jogging in the morning, and she'd run circles around him all the way (she was sweet but not very well trained).

I'm glad you liked it!

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captainlon January 18 2010, 18:06:21 UTC
Is it your dog? Anyway it's beautiful!
I really like this! You write so well!! I love doggie Sam, but at the same time miss human Sam XD I love both and I love Dean-o!

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ratherastory January 18 2010, 18:09:12 UTC
It's not my dog, unfortunately. She died eighteen years ago, but that's what she looked like.

These are all different dogs, just pictures I yanked from Google. Belgian Shepherds are gorgeous, gorgeous dogs.

I'm afraid you'll have to wait for quite a while before Human!Sam makes a reappearance. This story is about getting Sam back, in more ways than one. :)

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captainlon January 18 2010, 19:34:39 UTC
Oh :( But yeah, they look like a beautiful breed! =)

haha and I survive a while, I love your stories and love realpuppySam XD

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mimblexwimble January 18 2010, 19:09:04 UTC
Rambo!Dog!Sam, awesome! I love your characterization of Dean, by the way. It's very easy to hear him. And the image of Dean playing fetch with Sam was lovely. Can't wait for more. <3

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ratherastory January 18 2010, 19:14:59 UTC
Thank you! :)

It turns out that Sam really doesn't like demons when he's a dog. Not that he's a huge fan when he's human, either...

I wanted to give both the boys a bit of a break before I start heaping crap on them in later chapters, and who doesn't love a good game of fetch? ;)

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mimblexwimble January 18 2010, 19:18:57 UTC
...before I start heaping crap on them in later chapters...

How sad is it that that bit filled me with glee?

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ratherastory January 18 2010, 19:21:58 UTC
LOL

Hey, I'm the one who let my happy little crack!fic turn angsty and full of whump. :D

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