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Take Me Home -Part 4

Jan 16, 2010 08:34

Title: Take Me Home
Summary: The Trickster decides to have some fun with Sam. Wackiness ensues, with a healthy helping of whump, because it's me and I can't leave the boys intact.
Spoilers: All aired episodes up to 5.10
Word Count: 1,637 for this chapter
Disclaimer: Luckily for them, I own nothing. Otherwise they'd be in for a world of hurt.
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fanfic, take me home, supernatural

Comments 24

borgmama1of5 January 16 2010, 14:33:20 UTC

Part 4 is just a picture? Or is there a glitch in the link?

ratherastory January 16 2010, 18:15:05 UTC

Ack! It's fixed now.

borgmama1of5 January 16 2010, 18:21:52 UTC

I am so caught up in this--is it still a WIP or is it finished and just being posted in part?

I LOVE your writing!

ratherastory January 17 2010, 05:10:25 UTC

Hee! Thank you!

It's a WIP but it's drawing to a close pretty soon, so I promise not to leave people hanging without an ending.

I am still undecided about the ending, it could go one of two or maybe even three ways.

borgmama1of5 January 17 2010, 05:17:37 UTC

I'm writing a Weechester story right now and I keep hitting spots where I can go happy or sad and it's so hard to decide. I had to stop the other night because I didn't know which way to go and I had to wait until the boys told me the next day.

So I'm sure they'll help you out with your ending. :)

ratherastory January 17 2010, 05:40:53 UTC

Wee!chesters! Hurray! I can hardly wait. :)

Isn't it hard to decide these things? I ended up going a little sad/dark in some chapters of this fic, and then of course I tried to compensate a little bit in others. It's a fine line.

The problem I have is that I kind of like Doggy!Sam and I don't really want to fix him. He's so much happier as a dog, poor bunny.:P

tifaching January 16 2010, 20:03:26 UTC

I love the pictures you found to go with the story. In this particular one, the dog looks very tall! And I love how Castiel asks why Sam is a dog. He's so adorably clueless. And Dean bringing Sam his bacon. And getting dog kisses on the lips. I work for a veterinarian and I get doggie kisses like that all the time. It's gross and adorable all at once. Loving the story!

ratherastory January 17 2010, 05:18:14 UTC

Hee!

I am having lots of fun googling pictures for this story. :D

I had a dog growing up (a Belgian Shepherd, as it happens), and so I'm reliving all my happy and nostalgic doggy memories with this story. :)

Poor Cas. I think if he weren't an angel that being around the Winchesters would totally give him a stomach ulcer.

primrose_1 January 16 2010, 20:21:49 UTC

*snicker* Okay, this was just CUTE.

ratherastory January 17 2010, 05:19:36 UTC

:D

I'm ridiculously pleased you liked it.

blubird_pie January 16 2010, 23:37:35 UTC

Haha, Dean is so put upon. I love the characterization- spot on despite your claim that this is "utter crack" ;) Sam as a dog is super-cute, too!

ratherastory January 17 2010, 05:24:54 UTC

Aww, thank you!

I dunno, it strikes me as pretty cracky, but maybe I don't have the right definition of crack?

I try to be careful of my characterizations, because nothing pulls me out of a story more than when the boys (or anyone else) seems to be acting or talking way out of character.

Cute!Doggy!Sam is pretty much the only reason I wrote this fic. The rest is just gravy. ;)

Thanks for the lovely comment!