A bitter anthem of sweet goodbyes

[rastamasta420]

Just a song im working on im never very good at this im gunna add/change later its 2 am and im done for now. Im gunna bust out some flight of the condor, if u think it sucks tell me or if u have any tips on chnages or ways to make it better feel free to help

Comments

[deepindepp]

Dude you're insane, that's really good. It kind of reminds me of one of my poems too, like the whole theme of it and everything. It's nice, I like it. Good rhythm, nice word choices, and strong metaphors. Good job! =D

[n8ivepride126]

dude, that's a good one! i don't think i'd change anything!

[spdavidshot31]

i like ♥

[desmusmiridious]

Most impressive.