For everyone: All the King’s Warships and All the King’s Men

Jan 28, 2015 18:32

For: Everyone
Author: alesserrain
Title: All the King’s Warships and All the King’s Men
Rating: R
Pairing: Baekhyun/Lay
Word count: 7391
Warnings: language, handwavy!science, secondhand embarrassment, nonlinear
Summary: Baekhyun is a warship whisperer and Yixing is his military detail. There’s a problem about boners but it’s not actually as funny ( Read more... )

rating: r, !r2014, pairing: baekhyun/lay

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drainbamage954 January 29 2015, 20:58:11 UTC
this was glorious. no, seriously, this was so wrap around jump around stories everywhere but they're all perfect kind of fantastic. There was not a dull moment in this and I loved every second of it. I loved how all the stories just kind of smashed together in a mish-mash of time that all ended up kind of bulking the overall thing together and fuck the way it just shoved us into baekxing without us realizing it is perfection.

I LOVED ALL THE FRIENDSHIPS SO GODDAMN MUCH!!! Literally everyone in this was glorious and hilarious and fuck baekhyun is such a mess of nerves and also fantastic stories and humor this was just such a fun and great read. And the baekxing, the baekxing was so soft and subtle but also kind of awkward erection in your back definitely there and fuck it was gorgeous.

I have to say the world you made up for this is honestly one of my favorites I've read in a LONG ASS TIME. The sentient machines, the music to communicate to them and all the 'handwavy science' just made this awesome and really, really fun.

Thank you for writing this it's definitely one of my favorites!!!!

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alesserrain February 3 2015, 01:37:35 UTC
I've been wibbling about, typing and retyping how to respond to this because ahhh I'm just, this is such a lovely comment and I'm super happy and flattered that someone liked this and it worked somehow. I loved how all the stories just kind of smashed together in a mish-mash of time I wasn't confident if it will hold together and yay I'm happy it did :D :D

Without a doubt my favorite part of writing this was their friendships and their snark and it just cemented how much I like the group lol. And this: baekxing was so soft and subtle but also kind of awkward erection in your back I've always liked how baekxing in real life are so supportive and gentle with each other. I'm glad you like their dynamic here!

Thank you very much for commenting! And liking my 'handwavy science' haha (I have lots of feelings about AIs and space). The comments are literally making the first quarter of my year :D

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