For Isolated_killer: Watch Us Until We Blur

[cathmorland]

For: isolated_killer
Author: rokeby
Title: Watch Us Until We Blur
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jongdae/Jongin, Minseok/Luhan.
Word count: ~9,5k.
Warnings: Barebacking, knotting, A/B/O dynamics, biting, mentions of blood, rimming, some violence. Yifan(?), Luhan(?).
Summary: Wolf!AU. After his pack is merged with another pack, Jongdae struggles with the new alpha, who seems

Comments

RE: FREAKING FINALLY OH MY GOD

[isolated_killer]

I enjoyed this so much, I have not enough words to express all my emotions. This had a very dynamic plotline, and great characterization (which is the one, the most important thing in any fic, damn), great writing style and just *flips table and self*

I LOVED JONGDAE IN THIS. He's so strong-willed and knows what he wants and knows what he needs. This is the kind of characterization I look forward to in any fic ;A; he's the ultimate alpha, he is amazing and strong and charismatic and, author-nim, you've captured everything ideally ;A; *hugs you to chest*

Jongin was so the good amounts of shy but bold when he knows that he can be, which ia A+ characterstics, because despite claiming that he's a male epitome of sexy, he's still a potato at times ;A; you describes him being so hot though mamma mia ma hearteu

I loved Minseok in this. To be honest, I kind of imagine Minseok and Jongdae's friendship to be like that - two alphas, aware of their powers, sharing time ;A; idk im not making any sense, I just really liked their relationship in this, so so great, feels just right ;A;

I liked the pack dynamics that you write about - they read as very much similar to the ones that a real big pack of wolves has, and it doubles the points because I love the work on details, details are the most important ones in fic ;A;

The sex is *wheezes* You described them so nicely, it was so easy to imagine them ghere, panting and making... love and im gonna shut up now.

Seriously, thank you very much. This was an amazing read, thanks to your style and your idea and I'm seriously happy that I got so lucky with my writer ;A; I'm the happiest recipient ever, you're fantastic, once again

THANK YOU VERY MUCH