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For Isolated_killer: Watch Us Until We Blur

Jan 28, 2015 18:30

For: isolated_killer
Author: rokeby
Title: Watch Us Until We Blur
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jongdae/Jongin, Minseok/Luhan.
Word count: ~9,5k.
Warnings: Barebacking, knotting, A/B/O dynamics, biting, mentions of blood, rimming, some violence. Yifan(?), Luhan(?).
Summary: Wolf!AU. After his pack is merged with another pack, Jongdae struggles with the new alpha, who seems ( Read more... )

pairing: chen/kai, !r2014, rating: nc-17

Comments 8

FREAKING FINALLY OH MY GOD isolated_killer January 28 2015, 17:57:31 UTC

the spot of spots damn hell

I warn that I don't have time to read till very late tonight BUT I WILL BE BACK WITH PROPER COMMENT #FUUUUUUUUUUUU

RE: FREAKING FINALLY OH MY GOD isolated_killer January 29 2015, 14:23:23 UTC

I enjoyed this so much, I have not enough words to express all my emotions. This had a very dynamic plotline, and great characterization (which is the one, the most important thing in any fic, damn), great writing style and just *flips table and self ( ... )

thesockmonster January 28 2015, 18:41:44 UTC

Oh I really love this! Your take on Alpha Minseok was really refreshing and Jongdae's personality is perfect. Such a trouble maker. XD And Jongin, sweet sweet omega Jongin. *happy sigh* Flawless. And a hero. Jongdae's hero. I can't stop grinning at that. Thank you for this!

amaxingbaek January 28 2015, 23:30:08 UTC

His alpha is merciless, brutal at times, and even though Jongdae belongs in his pack, he won't hesitate about hurting Jongdae as long as he thinks it could teach Jongdae a lesson.
:/ Not sure if I like where this is going...I mean, of course, not every alpha is going to be :D and “no, don’t worry, everything is wonderful and happy and perfect,” but I’m not used to it (which is sad).

ALPHA MINSEOK. BE STILL MY HEART, NO MATTER IF HE’S MERCILESS OR NOT.

IS LUHAN ALSO AN ALPHA?!

PREGNANT LUHAN OH MY GOD.

Oh shit, Luhan’s an omega o.o And he was the leader...woah. Props for him.

Aww fuck, Yixing is adorable T.T Why do people always make him adorable? My heart...it hurts, it can’t handle all the cute.

"I don't like showing my cock to everyone," Yixing said to Jongdae, frowning, one time Jongdae had asked him.
LMAO you cute thing.

Jongin is stunning.Talk about an understatement ( ... )

pseudo_shigure January 29 2015, 08:09:56 UTC

Alpha!jongdae /crie/
NEVER ENOUGH ALPHA!JONGDAE

bluedreaming January 30 2015, 00:01:40 UTC

I loved the way you only introduced their alpha/omega status after you introduced the character, that they defined themselves and weren't defined by the their status. Also the mention that Lu Han is an omega but was previously leader - I really like that. This is a great story!