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A Gift For kietorata: A Christmas Truth, (Ginny/Pansy, R)

Jan 06, 2017 21:47

Author: flipflop_diva
Recipient: kiertorata
Title: A Christmas Truth
Pairing: Pansy Parkinson/Ginny Weasley
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,582
Summary: This was their first Christmas together. It was supposed to be wonderful and magical, but instead Ginny has never been this nervous in her life.
Author's Notes: Thanks to A for all the encouragement in writing a different ( Read more... )

pairing: pansy/ginny, *femslash, .fic exchange: winter 2016-2017

Comments 3

kittyaugust January 7 2017, 01:00:40 UTC

This was deliciously beautiful. I loved the sensual start, then the tug of Ginny's nervousness was palpable. You gave both of them such clear voices in such a short fic, it was delightful. Really great work and a fantastic paring. I'm left hoping that it goes well for them but knowing they'll get home and make it better for each other if it doesn't. Gorgeous work.

articcat621 January 7 2017, 01:05:04 UTC

What a delightful bit of fun! There was the perfect amount of angst to this, but I love that they have each other and that they'll get through the day regardless of what happens :) nicely done! <3

kiertorata January 7 2017, 08:53:20 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH! Reading this was pure enjoyment - it was exactly what I hoped for and more! ❤

I loved the way the story started - so hot. And this:

There was a huff of air in her ear, and then the fingers withdrew, but not before one last quick rub, as if to show Ginny what she would be missing.

How very Slytherin of Pansy. :D

No, today had permanent ramifications that could alter their entire relationship. And even if she was loathe to admit it, she knew today could spell the end to any future they might possibly have.

Unless she did that for them first, of course.

Self-sabotage - such a human way to react to fear.

What Ginny did not expect to see was Pansy smiling, almost warmly, at her, a plate of gingerbread cookies in her hands, her body still completely without a stitch of clothing.

Haha, this is totally how I imagine their life together - sometimes affectionate, occasionally bitchy, but always teasing each other and driving each other mad with desire. :D

Totally snorted outloud when I read this:

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