WISHLISTS: Perfect (Michael/Padma)

Jul 24, 2011 17:21

Author: bendleshnitz1
Recipient: leigh_adams
Title: Perfect
Pairing: Michael Corner/Padma Patil
Request: "[He/she] wanted the other twin."
Rating: PG
Word Count: 221
Summary: Sometimes, perfect is not what we want.
Author's Notes: Leigh, this is short and silly. Not betaed. But I wanted to write you a little something. Hope you like it :)

Perfect )

.wishlists: summer 2011, pairing: michael/padma, *het, user: bendleshnitz1

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leigh_adams July 24 2011, 21:49:16 UTC
*sobs*

This was beautiful, hun! It is not silly, it's wonderful. You put so much of their relationship into so few words, and I applaud you for it. And it's ANGST! I love angst! :D

*SMOOSH* Thank you SO MUCH!!!!

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bendleshnitz1 July 25 2011, 04:16:17 UTC
So glad you liked it! :D
*squishes*

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bluemermaid July 26 2011, 02:53:10 UTC
This is really good. I love how you portrayed their relationship, you can really see the whole complex thing of it in so few words! And then that last line is such a punch to the gut. I definitely like this. :)

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bendleshnitz1 July 26 2011, 03:13:48 UTC
Thank you!
I'm really glad you liked it.
And I know! I feel so bad for Padma.

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peskywhistpaw August 7 2011, 01:37:42 UTC
Oh, ouch, poor Padma! I love that, though, the long paragraph detailing how perfect she actually is for him, and then the last line basically punching you in the gut. XD

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bendleshnitz1 August 7 2011, 02:42:15 UTC
Glad you liked it :)
I feel bad for Padma too

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swissmarg September 6 2011, 19:01:03 UTC
Aw, so hearbreaking. Nicely done.

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bendleshnitz1 September 6 2011, 20:03:44 UTC
Thanks :)

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