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Ficlet: Apples & Oranges (Katie/Percy)

Feb 20, 2011 22:49

Title: Apples & Oranges
Pairing: Katie/Percy
Prompt: where the watermelons grow
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,653
Summary: Percy and Katie's first beginning.
Author's Notes: Don't own a thing-not even the pen I used to scribble all this down earlier today. Seriously, I had to return it. Also I can't quite make George be alone in this world, so Fred is ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

bluemermaid February 26 2011, 15:45:37 UTC

Haha, I love it! Oblivious!Percy is cute, and I loved the Katie and Angelina interaction, as well as the whole idea of an Assumption Day Fred-and-George style. Great!

wicked_g February 27 2011, 03:30:03 UTC

Thanks : )

I think I could've taken more time with this, maybe make the initial courtship a little more...obvious. But then again, Percy isn't exactly an obvious person. Well, where Katie's concerned, that is.

leigh_adams February 26 2011, 16:11:02 UTC

1- Kudos on the Dirty Dancing reference! I ♥ it!

2- I love the idea of the Fire Melon. Now I'm going to have to make that for the next party my friends throw... though I don't know how easy that would be to carry on the Metro.

3- Great job! I can't wait to read the next one! :D

wicked_g February 27 2011, 03:21:20 UTC

1- yaaaayyy!!! The prompt made me want to turn it into an actual dirty dance, but I couldn't bring myself to make Percy so very uncomfortable. Poor guy.

2- I actually found the recipe ages ago in a Jamie Oliver book...pretty easy to find online though.

3- And thank you! :)